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Discuss: Chapters 17- 24

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Here is where you can discuss chapters 17 - 24, pages 199 - 300, of Slayer!
 

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Finally got through this part...

Buffy references continue
  • Fear demon and how little they are (yes, this reference was more clever and less on the nose than the rest)
  • Pylea reference
  • Kittens as demon snacks reference
  • Wes works for Angel reference
  • After school special ”Watcher’s council not always perfect. Maybe that’s why Buffy all those years ago ditched us. Though that was wrong”
  • and of course, vampires can change, ”most who did actually dated Buffy”
Then there is Sean’s operation which is kind of Ats episode ”The Ring” meets The Initiative...

At this point I’m like - why aren’t we just watching Buffy instead? Cut out the references and the sour ”thaaanks, Buffy for ruining (insert:X)” this book would be like 100 pages shorter.


On the actual story:
-Artemis is really starting to bug me, I get that there needs to be a predictable falling apart, but she’s very annoying
  • Don’t sell the books! me crying over old, fictional books
  • I like Eve’s interactions with Nina buuut I’m guessing Nina wishing her mom was like Eve means that Eve will actually be the bad guy, not Nina’s mom.
  • Leo is definitely too perfect, didn’t think about it at first
  • Nina, stop being so repetitive. You’re a healer, not a breaker, we get it
  • The prophecy.. do I care? Not sure. I don’t know the characters enough yet to real care about one of the twins going evil. I like the general idea though, especially if Artemis were to become the main villain of this series. That could be cool
Honestly, this hasn’t gotten interesting yet. the original story is predictable mixed with too many Buffy references and I find it hard to care what’s going to happen next or to the characters.

Weakly hoping the last part will be better, but it seems to be working up to a ”Buffy’s not so bad after all”, I appreciate my powers now

Edit: I liked the Eurovision reference! That got a smile outta me :)
 
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With each post you make I am more and more glader that I gave up on it at chapter 2.

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Again, I am much more positive than you @Taake. I mean it is not a great piece of literature, but I'd categorise it as a fun and angsty YA romp.

Okay so a lot happened in this part.

What I liked:
- there seem to be fewer references or I don't notice them anymore lol.

- the writing is less repetitive. I mean the fire hasn't been mentioned for over 3 chapters.

- I love that Artemis is just kind of...bad. I mean she is freaking annoying, but I do get why the character's motivations. I want her to be evil.

- Honora being evil. I mean yes. I like that a lot of the Watchers are corrupt. Go with the moral greyness.

- I am really loving Nina. I think she has grown and is still relatable. She could become such an interesting and complext character. We are so close. Nina pls do something evil and regret it.

What I disliked:
- Leo. I kind of like him even though he is such a mary sue, however, he is much more of a character than Angel was in s1. So there is that. I think he was potential.

- I am okay with the romance, but can Leo and Nina have one scene where they are not being interrupted?

- the prophecy is just...so predictable. I know that Artemis is ths hunter and Nina is the healer. I wish there were a few scenes with Nina going too far. Then it would have been interesting.

Predictions:
  • Eve is the baddy.
  • Nina is going to kill Honora
  • Nina is going to save Artemis last minute and will avert the apocalypse.
  • the mother is the hero all along.
  • Leo and Nina are going to get smooches. Loads.

There is one thing that frustrates me. If this book had had a proper editor, cut down 100 pages (or more character stuff) and streamlined the plot a bit more then this could have been an amazing book. There is so much potential in the story and the bits that are good are really good. I really hope that this will improve with the second book.
 

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@Foxy I agree with your predictions but really hope some of them do not come true, because toooooo predictable. Please let mommy dearest be mommy dearest, pleeeeease :p
 
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You will see! I need you to finish it ASAP so we can talk about the ending.

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Honora saying, “What is your damage?” made me want to stop reading lol. And that she was involved was super predictable. I feel like there wasn’t enough time between her return and her betrayal being revealed to Artemis. She is a bitca though.

Nina acting like, poor me, I’m so unlovable and useless, grates on me a bit. Does she really have self esteem that low.

I like Doug. I feel like Eve is the hunter. I keep waiting for her betrayal.
 
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