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Alyson
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Hey everyone, I am starting to write a Buffy/Charmed Crossover. That is sopposed to be set in season 8. Please don't laugh I did the best I could and this is my first go, also can you tell me how I can improve? Here is the 1st chapter:
Chapter 1
"Why can't I go?" Dawn cried, as she ran of to her room. She is always blamed for everything, buffy - her sister "“ is a vampire slayer she has to slay demons and vamps to help for the future good. But why did this have to happen? All the fighting? It was all really good before she died and Willow revived her and she came back to life. They all treat her like a kid, at least Spike treats her like anyone else. Well she is over 15, which is stated as a teenager going onto a women, but of course buffy has to blame her from everything.
"Dawn" Buffy said through the door " Oh dawn come out I didn't mean it like that it's not that your too young to go to the airport it's just that it's a bit dangerous you know?" Dawn appeared to buffy's face with a very sour face "Of course, that's what you say, but what you mean is that I'm just a kid, when I'm not! The airport isn't exactly the vamps no. 1 hang out..Buffy, please let me go, I love all the potentials we are really goo friends, especially Sarah she's really nice" "Sarah?" buffy questioned "Who's Sarah?"
This is just typical, I tell buffy everything but she still forgets Dawn thought all she has been thinking about all summer is her vampire-sopposed-to-be-exboyfreind Angel, since he returned from LA. "Sarah is the one from Australia"¦remember oh here she is" "Hey dawn" Sarah came round the corner carrying a bowl of fruit loops with her, "Hey buffy, how are you? Dawn, have you seen my brush?" "Your brush I think it is my room, cause you have been hanging out in there so often" answered dawn as she glared at buffy and walked off.
"Given the cold shoulder?" Willow asked standing behind buffy "Yea, again" she answered "You know I just wish that I had more time for dawn, but I have to go patrolling every single night, it's like, I never know what she is up to you know? She could go for a ride to Mexico and back for all I know" "Hey buffy" Willow put her hand around her shoulder "Your doing the best anyone could do, having to kill the first of all evil, and believe me there's been a lot of evil, feeding all the people in this house, chasing after me when I do spells and turn all big-black-hair, that's a lot to do in just one week" Buffy smiled "Yea I guess, but yet again I have to go patrolling, will, can you look after dawn and everyone, tell Faith where I am, I think she is at the mall and dinners in the oven, bye"
Buffy grabbed her coat and headed out the door as she heard the bell on the stove to say that the cooking was complete willow is probably serving it up now buffy thought she is really good at taking care of everyone, she has been her best friend for 8 years, when she moved to sunnydale. And there is Xander her other friend who has been in all her battles with her, I remember the good old days when it was just me, will and Xander, in all these years they have made it through"¦.hm"¦ there is also Giles, the ex librarian and shopkeeper, he has been helping her train and battle he is a watcher he sometimes can be a bit too serious bet then again he helped her blow up the school, also her beloved sister, dawn. And the ex-vengeance demon Anya she is getting very good to being adapted as a human and knowing how precious life is. Also there's all the potential slayers, who one of them will take over what buffy is "“ A slayer once she dissipates and dies from this Earth. And Faith, after buffy died a few years ago she was called to be a slayer, but now there is two slayers, and Spike the Vampire with a soul who can't hurt anyone.
Buffy heard someone gasp, Buffy ran over to the girl she would have been maybe in her late 20's she came up to the vamp and staked him. The girl fell but buffy catched her, "Are you alright?" buffy asked moving her to a empty varandah "no bodies ever fainted on me before" she said checking for any 2 familiar holes in her neck, nothing clean must be just a bit shaken up. "Where am I?" she asked looking at buffy. "Ah, you just fainted as you were walking home - I think - are you ok? What's your name?" she answered "I"fine I think, I better just go home" "Oh, I can take you home, I don't think it is safe to wander out at night, where do you live?" The girl looked puzzled and said "I..um"¦I...I don't remember"
Chapter 1
"Why can't I go?" Dawn cried, as she ran of to her room. She is always blamed for everything, buffy - her sister "“ is a vampire slayer she has to slay demons and vamps to help for the future good. But why did this have to happen? All the fighting? It was all really good before she died and Willow revived her and she came back to life. They all treat her like a kid, at least Spike treats her like anyone else. Well she is over 15, which is stated as a teenager going onto a women, but of course buffy has to blame her from everything.
"Dawn" Buffy said through the door " Oh dawn come out I didn't mean it like that it's not that your too young to go to the airport it's just that it's a bit dangerous you know?" Dawn appeared to buffy's face with a very sour face "Of course, that's what you say, but what you mean is that I'm just a kid, when I'm not! The airport isn't exactly the vamps no. 1 hang out..Buffy, please let me go, I love all the potentials we are really goo friends, especially Sarah she's really nice" "Sarah?" buffy questioned "Who's Sarah?"
This is just typical, I tell buffy everything but she still forgets Dawn thought all she has been thinking about all summer is her vampire-sopposed-to-be-exboyfreind Angel, since he returned from LA. "Sarah is the one from Australia"¦remember oh here she is" "Hey dawn" Sarah came round the corner carrying a bowl of fruit loops with her, "Hey buffy, how are you? Dawn, have you seen my brush?" "Your brush I think it is my room, cause you have been hanging out in there so often" answered dawn as she glared at buffy and walked off.
"Given the cold shoulder?" Willow asked standing behind buffy "Yea, again" she answered "You know I just wish that I had more time for dawn, but I have to go patrolling every single night, it's like, I never know what she is up to you know? She could go for a ride to Mexico and back for all I know" "Hey buffy" Willow put her hand around her shoulder "Your doing the best anyone could do, having to kill the first of all evil, and believe me there's been a lot of evil, feeding all the people in this house, chasing after me when I do spells and turn all big-black-hair, that's a lot to do in just one week" Buffy smiled "Yea I guess, but yet again I have to go patrolling, will, can you look after dawn and everyone, tell Faith where I am, I think she is at the mall and dinners in the oven, bye"
Buffy grabbed her coat and headed out the door as she heard the bell on the stove to say that the cooking was complete willow is probably serving it up now buffy thought she is really good at taking care of everyone, she has been her best friend for 8 years, when she moved to sunnydale. And there is Xander her other friend who has been in all her battles with her, I remember the good old days when it was just me, will and Xander, in all these years they have made it through"¦.hm"¦ there is also Giles, the ex librarian and shopkeeper, he has been helping her train and battle he is a watcher he sometimes can be a bit too serious bet then again he helped her blow up the school, also her beloved sister, dawn. And the ex-vengeance demon Anya she is getting very good to being adapted as a human and knowing how precious life is. Also there's all the potential slayers, who one of them will take over what buffy is "“ A slayer once she dissipates and dies from this Earth. And Faith, after buffy died a few years ago she was called to be a slayer, but now there is two slayers, and Spike the Vampire with a soul who can't hurt anyone.
Buffy heard someone gasp, Buffy ran over to the girl she would have been maybe in her late 20's she came up to the vamp and staked him. The girl fell but buffy catched her, "Are you alright?" buffy asked moving her to a empty varandah "no bodies ever fainted on me before" she said checking for any 2 familiar holes in her neck, nothing clean must be just a bit shaken up. "Where am I?" she asked looking at buffy. "Ah, you just fainted as you were walking home - I think - are you ok? What's your name?" she answered "I"fine I think, I better just go home" "Oh, I can take you home, I don't think it is safe to wander out at night, where do you live?" The girl looked puzzled and said "I..um"¦I...I don't remember"