Hey all! I wasnt sure where to post this, but here it is. If you havent read it already, I hightly suggest you take a look @ my story. Journey To The Old World , before continuing. NE way...I'm COMPLETELY stuck in my story & I need some
MAJOR help ASAP!!! It's for an important fight scene between Angel & Spike @ the Hyperion. Following are all the details you need, anything else, just ask.
Setting: Hyperion Lobby mid-day (rem...Spike can now walk freely in the sun)
Cordy & Fred are manning front desk when Spike walks in. He doesn't know Fred or Gunn, but knows of them as well as Connor. Boys are out on mission (minus Angel who's also on a mission, but alone & returns while Cordy & Fred are collecting Spike's papers (green card, visa,passport, birth certificate & some $$...a lot of it...but not his whole "account".) Rest of guys return during fight, but keep out of it...knowing better.
1st Punch: Angel over smelling/senseing Buffy on/around Spike.
Fair or close fight: HA!!! Not likely. Angel's punch is a surprise
attack.
Winner: Spike knocking Angel un-concious & bleeding. (not too badly, but enough to take a few days to heal)
Weapons: Mostly fists...others are fine too...no stab wounds on
Spike. possible accidental on Angel...only from spike trying to get
away. Lots of trash talking!!
Reason for fight: Angel's jealous rage.
Backround for Fang Gang: Angel & Cordy are together, but semi
secretively. Connor is full grown, (like in the show) but here he has fatherly respect for Angle & Motherly respect for Cordy (even calls her mom & him dad). Fred & Wesley are together, Gunn & Fred get along..no hard feeling between any of the trio. (Gunn, Fred, Wes.)
Injuries: Spike gets a split lip & some bruises & minor cuts & such
on his face & hands (as well as elsewhere) but nothing too bad...but enough for Buffy to fuss over him later abt though.
Angel is in much worse condition seeing as how he gets knocked
unconcious & all...his wounds are deeper & should take a few days to heal, but rightly deserved.
Buffy & Spike's relationship: Spike does NOT tell Angel that he &
Buffy really are in a relationship he basically lets Angel assume
what he wants abt. the 2 of them, but is sure to defend Buffy's
actions of hanging out w/ & being around him alot, but he also tries to tell Angel that he & Buffy are just good friends & he's become her listening ear, so to speak.
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Well...that's all the info needed to write out that scene. I've been trying my rear off for a while now & everytime I try, I don;t like how it's turned out & I scrap it. So now, I've become desperate & I'm BEGGING for anyones help here. This scene is coming up really soon, so I kinda need to get it done. So...w/ that said, ne 1 who;s willing to do me the hugest favor in the world & help me out by writing out that scene, I;d be soooooooooooooo grateful!!! I'll make sure to give you FULL credit, & If you'd like, I'll make you an extra character later on in the story!!!! JUST PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!!!! Let me know if you intend on helping me out by either replying on here, or sending me an e-mail to ape18@hotmail.com or you can even do both!!! JUST PLEASE HELP!!!!!!!!!!!
~April
PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
(BTW...I also have bits & pieces that a cpl other ppl attempted but
they're really incomplete, if you need something to work off of...)
(I'm looking for someone to either "fill in the blanks" so to speak,
or write it for me all together. I know I should do it myself, but
like I've said, whatever I do w/it comes out so messed up for me & I wind up scrapping the whole thing ne way!!)PLEASE HELP!!!!
MAJOR help ASAP!!! It's for an important fight scene between Angel & Spike @ the Hyperion. Following are all the details you need, anything else, just ask.
Setting: Hyperion Lobby mid-day (rem...Spike can now walk freely in the sun)
Cordy & Fred are manning front desk when Spike walks in. He doesn't know Fred or Gunn, but knows of them as well as Connor. Boys are out on mission (minus Angel who's also on a mission, but alone & returns while Cordy & Fred are collecting Spike's papers (green card, visa,passport, birth certificate & some $$...a lot of it...but not his whole "account".) Rest of guys return during fight, but keep out of it...knowing better.
1st Punch: Angel over smelling/senseing Buffy on/around Spike.
Fair or close fight: HA!!! Not likely. Angel's punch is a surprise
attack.
Winner: Spike knocking Angel un-concious & bleeding. (not too badly, but enough to take a few days to heal)
Weapons: Mostly fists...others are fine too...no stab wounds on
Spike. possible accidental on Angel...only from spike trying to get
away. Lots of trash talking!!
Reason for fight: Angel's jealous rage.
Backround for Fang Gang: Angel & Cordy are together, but semi
secretively. Connor is full grown, (like in the show) but here he has fatherly respect for Angle & Motherly respect for Cordy (even calls her mom & him dad). Fred & Wesley are together, Gunn & Fred get along..no hard feeling between any of the trio. (Gunn, Fred, Wes.)
Injuries: Spike gets a split lip & some bruises & minor cuts & such
on his face & hands (as well as elsewhere) but nothing too bad...but enough for Buffy to fuss over him later abt though.
Angel is in much worse condition seeing as how he gets knocked
unconcious & all...his wounds are deeper & should take a few days to heal, but rightly deserved.
Buffy & Spike's relationship: Spike does NOT tell Angel that he &
Buffy really are in a relationship he basically lets Angel assume
what he wants abt. the 2 of them, but is sure to defend Buffy's
actions of hanging out w/ & being around him alot, but he also tries to tell Angel that he & Buffy are just good friends & he's become her listening ear, so to speak.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Well...that's all the info needed to write out that scene. I've been trying my rear off for a while now & everytime I try, I don;t like how it's turned out & I scrap it. So now, I've become desperate & I'm BEGGING for anyones help here. This scene is coming up really soon, so I kinda need to get it done. So...w/ that said, ne 1 who;s willing to do me the hugest favor in the world & help me out by writing out that scene, I;d be soooooooooooooo grateful!!! I'll make sure to give you FULL credit, & If you'd like, I'll make you an extra character later on in the story!!!! JUST PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!!!! Let me know if you intend on helping me out by either replying on here, or sending me an e-mail to ape18@hotmail.com or you can even do both!!! JUST PLEASE HELP!!!!!!!!!!!
~April
PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
(BTW...I also have bits & pieces that a cpl other ppl attempted but
they're really incomplete, if you need something to work off of...)
(I'm looking for someone to either "fill in the blanks" so to speak,
or write it for me all together. I know I should do it myself, but
like I've said, whatever I do w/it comes out so messed up for me & I wind up scrapping the whole thing ne way!!)PLEASE HELP!!!!