Dollhouse Fanfic

[Fresley4ever]

I wrote a little bit of a Dollhouse fanfic. I am not sure how anyone would feel about the premise of it. I would like to know what everyone else thinks of it. Mostly I am looking for grammar flaws and stuff like that. Anyways here is it is.

spider_lily: Dollhouse Fanfic

 

[Joan the Vampire Slayer]

I'll look it over and be back with comments 🙂

 

[Fresley4ever]

Okay. 😀 I will be looking forward to hearing from you.