Ok folks this the official introduction of my first Buffy "˜related' story. I haven't written Fanfic or anything in story form for that matter since highschool, so be gentle, lol.
Now none of this has anything to do with Buffy or Angel YET, it my come to that later though, that's why I consider it Buffy "˜related'. *** there is a bit of swearing in it, so if you'd be offended, please read no further. This has no title yet, and I know I will redo lots of it. I just thought I would post to get some feed back. I want to see if you guys think it's any good before I add to it.
So please leave any thoughts or suggestions, good or bad. I want to know honestly if its any good.. So *crosses fingers* please let me know what you think.
Thanks all!
Part One
"Where the hell is Amy?"
That thought kept ringing through her mind as she paced in the ally..
"yeah Amy is always late.. That's one of her quirks, but really.. She is really late." Elle sighed.
"I am probably worrying to much" she said to herself out loud. She turned and took in her surroundings for the 10th time in the last half hour.. She was unnerved, and not just because Amy was late. It was getting cold as ****, and she felt edgy, like someone was watching, but more like some one was gawking, staring, drilling into her. She took her hands out of her jean jacket, pushed her dark hair from her eyes, and focused on the corner Amy should be coming around any second. Desperately trying to shake that nasty feeling she wasn't alone in the ally.
Three blocks away Amy is bumbling down the street in a hurried fashion, looking kind of like a goth Librarian. All doom and gloom, black clothes, dark makeup, blue hair, and more books than you can shake a stick at.
"God Elle is going to kill me" she said to herself under her breath.. And in that moment noticing she could see her breath she thought..
"˜SO going to kill me! Just a few blocks now, and yeah and hay. maybe Elle was late for a change, you know, and hasn't been there long freezing her ass off...." She stopped and sighed, shifting her books she mumbled
"yep, I am delusional.. Like Elle is ever late" just as she started tromping back up the hill, She tripped over a crack in the acceding sidewalk, spilling her stack of binders and books all over the ground.
"Damn it! This is shaping up to be one ****ty day!"
Back in the ally Elle paces.. Hands back in her jacket pockets.. Dark blue jeans, and a off white sweater.. Even with the jacket and the sweater she still felt cold.. Cold from the temp, or from the creepy feeling she was getting.. That she wondered..
"come on Amy.. come on" the feeling just kept growing on her.. She shuddered,
"Engulfing darkness, and spreading shadows" she remembered that quote from somewhere, a book probably..
" and not to mention that shadow in the corner seems to be getting darker by the moment..." she stared into it.. Eyes narrowing, she could almost.. Maybe... make out a figure?
"No..." she had been in this ally since before the sun set, no one was there, she felt stupid for being so paranoid. She straitened her back..
"enough" she says to herself
" I am standing outside of a church for craps sake, what am I jittery about?" her demeanor changes.. Lightens, as she convinces herself there is no reason to be worried.. She again focuses on the corner,
"Any time now.."
Kneeling Amy tries to collect her things..
"and I had them all in order to! So much for that" she heard a click behind her.. She glances back and see's nothing
"hmmm, creepy tonight" she thinks to herself.. Of course almost every night in this po dunk town is creepy .. Small town USA and none of the typical church going type approve of me. I get yelled at, made fun of, and people put milkshakes on my car... ****ing hick boys. It was never like that in New York.. Why did Dad have to lose his job and move here, to Illinois of all places? ever since mom died it just gets worse.. If is wasn't for Elle, I'd probably have..." She pauses as she stands, with the jumbled books once again in her arms.
"Yeah great, my only friend and I make her wait in the cold for 3 hours. I'm such an idiot" attempting to make up for the time lost, Amy begins to jog the rest of the 3 blocks..
"Uphill sucks" she thought "and these books are heavy" she crosses the street, "2 more blocks" and then
"Ummmph!" What the!?!?! something had slammed into Amy from the side flatting her and tossing all her books sky high.
"You ass!" she yells, then tried to roll on her back to get a look at who is was, but before she could even get turned around it was on her.. Heavy and close to her face.. This awful stench.. "Get off me, get off me!!!" she screams while trying to hit the person and wiggle from under it at the same time..
Smack
her head was slammed against the pavement, neck strained to the side, as the assailant put his hand over her mouth. The figure leans in.. That awful stench again.. Amy's eyes try to focus.. She struggles..
"Can't breath...." And just as she musters the strength to try to turn away to get air, it bites her..
"Oh my god.." She screams in her head... "oh god.."
"I'm going to die"
Back in the ally, Elle is still pacing.. She looks at her watch and says
"Screw it" she starts to walk to the corner.. She's going home.. She's been here for hours, she'll catch Amy another time.. Elle comes around the corner.. Looks to the left as she turns away to walk down the hill.. Then she hears .. something.. She snaps her head around.. And a pile..a jumble of something, moving in front of her, a few blocks ahead.. Wait no.. a man on top of a girl.. A girl who looks a lot like Amy..
"Amy!!! Oh god"
she runs.. Like she has never ran before.. Never that kind of running..
"Here I was sitting around in the ally and Amy is out here getting raped.. " she scolds herself as she runs.. It took only seconds it seemed to clear to two blocks to where the man and Amy lay, and since it was downhill the momentum was good.
"Half a block..and all that martial arts is about to pay off in a big way she thought" Elle used all her strength, and just as she reached them, stepped to the side, swung her back foot around using the momentum, and kicked that ******* smack in the face.. She had knocked him clean off of Amy.. Blood splattered on the side walk, and it was all over the mans face..
" I must have kicked him hard she thought" assuming the blood was from the guys face, not Amy's neck.. She jumped over Amy, just as the man was turning to get up she balled her fist and drove it into his face.. Grabbed his shirt pulled him up and did it again..
"*******, *******, *******!" She kept hitting him.. then a sound.. What was it? She punched again. Then it registered to her that a car was coming..
"A car", she thought.... "Good.. Help.." She put all her power into one last punch, and spun to flag the car.. But she noticed that Amy was still laying on the ground, not moving..
"What the ****?" she thought..
"Amy, are you ok?" She saw the man get up, out of the corner of her eye.. then he saw the car.. Looked at her, then the car.. Then turned and ran.. Elle kneeled by Amy, so much blood.. On her neck? From the mans face?... Not from the man.. From Amy..
Clad sang along to the stereo...
"I Stand Alone, Feeling Your Sting Down Inside Me.."
One hand on the wheel and the other slapping the dash to the rhythm.
"I'm Not Dying For It, I Stand Alone.."
Suddenly someone darts in front of his car.. Clad stiffens and he slams on his breaks..
"Oohhhh ****!!!" Fish tailing, he comes to a stop inches away form this girl..
"Jesus Mary and Joseph!!! what the hell are you doing??" He demands as he jumps out of the car to confront the girl he nearly turned to road kill..
"my friend" she says gasping
"you've got to help my friend" There's blood on her white-ish sweater, and laying a few feet away is another girl on the side walk.. Before he could move the first girl was back at the injured girls side.
"Amy, hun, your going to be ok.." She was putting her hands on the girls neck
"come help me! We need to get her to a hospital!!" The dark haired one demanded
"ah ah.. Yeah.. uh.. What.. umm..sure.. Just a.. let me.. " Clad studdered while standing there in shock.
"open your back door for christ's sake!, help me get her in.."
"Yeah, yes" he jumped into action.. Flinging open the door and scrambling to help put the girl he now knew as Amy in the back..
"We have to go, we have to go NOW."
Clad paused for a second.. The was a lot of blood.. A lot.
"Drive!!!" the dark haired girl yelled as she pointed to the steering wheel and closed the back door.
"Yeah.." he ran around the car.. Amy and the other were inside now.. He jumped in the seat, slammed it into drive,. Tires squealed, and the car began to move before he even got his door closed..
"Fast" he thought as he glanced in the rear view
"I need to go fast"
"What did he do to you.. What did he do?" Elle stared at Amy's face.. So pale.. Elle was in the back seat cradling Amy's head in her lap, putting pressure on her wound with one hand.. And trying to get a pulse with the other..
"Damn it.. Damn IT!!" Elle cried..
"What? What??" the guy in the front asked..
"What the hell happened?"
"I don't know.. I don't know.. I can't get a pulse.." Elle was shaking now.. It was all so terrifying.
"Is she breathing?" the guy asked.. Straining to see them in the mirror.
"I don't know.." Elle yelled..
"Snap out of it" she thought.. " you can do this, think, come on think"
she did her best to stop the shaking.. They were getting close to the hospital, she put her hand in front of Amy's nose and mouth..
"A breath!?! Was that a breath??" She paused.. Holding her own breath.. And again she felt it.. Ever so faint.. But it was there.. She was breathing.. Elle's heart jumped.. God at least she was breathing.
Clad was speeding,
"Ok, ok" he thought, "almost there" He saw the hospital emergency room entrance.
"It hasn't been that long, I got here really fast.. As fast as I could" He told himself as he turned sharply into the parking lot.. He looked in the rear view and saw the dark haired girl bracing herself as he turned..
"****, **** so sorry.. God I am just trying to get there and.." he tried to put on the breaks gently, but it ended up jerking quite a bit. The girls lurched forward, but he didn't stop to finish his apology.. He jumped out of the car and yelled..
"Help us!! Somebody help us!!" he saw a nurse coming, but didn't bother to wait. He ran to the back door and started helping the girl pull Amy out.. It was the first time he saw what was wrong.. He saw why the other girl kept covering Amy's neck.. It was awful.. He paused from the mere shock of it, just staring.. The girl noticed his pause, and he thought for sure he would yell at him again.. But she didn't. He saw she was crying a little.. She just kept trying to get the girl out by herself. Then the nurse shoved him out of the way.. She yelled
"we need a stretcher out here!!" And was helping the other girl prop Amy up against the car as two more nurses brouht out a stretcher.
"Good lord almighty" the nurse proclaimed and motioned for the others to hurry.. The three nurses put Amy on the stretcher and speed her into the hospital leaving the other two standing outside..
The Dark haired girl stood with an exhausted expression on her face as she watched her friend get wheeled away. She let out a breath, and put her hands on her face. Clad didn't know if she was crying, he wanted to go and comfort her, to ask if she was ok. but he couldn't bring himself to move.. He just stood there. They both just stood there.
Now none of this has anything to do with Buffy or Angel YET, it my come to that later though, that's why I consider it Buffy "˜related'. *** there is a bit of swearing in it, so if you'd be offended, please read no further. This has no title yet, and I know I will redo lots of it. I just thought I would post to get some feed back. I want to see if you guys think it's any good before I add to it.
So please leave any thoughts or suggestions, good or bad. I want to know honestly if its any good.. So *crosses fingers* please let me know what you think.
Thanks all!
Part One
"Where the hell is Amy?"
That thought kept ringing through her mind as she paced in the ally..
"yeah Amy is always late.. That's one of her quirks, but really.. She is really late." Elle sighed.
"I am probably worrying to much" she said to herself out loud. She turned and took in her surroundings for the 10th time in the last half hour.. She was unnerved, and not just because Amy was late. It was getting cold as ****, and she felt edgy, like someone was watching, but more like some one was gawking, staring, drilling into her. She took her hands out of her jean jacket, pushed her dark hair from her eyes, and focused on the corner Amy should be coming around any second. Desperately trying to shake that nasty feeling she wasn't alone in the ally.
Three blocks away Amy is bumbling down the street in a hurried fashion, looking kind of like a goth Librarian. All doom and gloom, black clothes, dark makeup, blue hair, and more books than you can shake a stick at.
"God Elle is going to kill me" she said to herself under her breath.. And in that moment noticing she could see her breath she thought..
"˜SO going to kill me! Just a few blocks now, and yeah and hay. maybe Elle was late for a change, you know, and hasn't been there long freezing her ass off...." She stopped and sighed, shifting her books she mumbled
"yep, I am delusional.. Like Elle is ever late" just as she started tromping back up the hill, She tripped over a crack in the acceding sidewalk, spilling her stack of binders and books all over the ground.
"Damn it! This is shaping up to be one ****ty day!"
Back in the ally Elle paces.. Hands back in her jacket pockets.. Dark blue jeans, and a off white sweater.. Even with the jacket and the sweater she still felt cold.. Cold from the temp, or from the creepy feeling she was getting.. That she wondered..
"come on Amy.. come on" the feeling just kept growing on her.. She shuddered,
"Engulfing darkness, and spreading shadows" she remembered that quote from somewhere, a book probably..
" and not to mention that shadow in the corner seems to be getting darker by the moment..." she stared into it.. Eyes narrowing, she could almost.. Maybe... make out a figure?
"No..." she had been in this ally since before the sun set, no one was there, she felt stupid for being so paranoid. She straitened her back..
"enough" she says to herself
" I am standing outside of a church for craps sake, what am I jittery about?" her demeanor changes.. Lightens, as she convinces herself there is no reason to be worried.. She again focuses on the corner,
"Any time now.."
Kneeling Amy tries to collect her things..
"and I had them all in order to! So much for that" she heard a click behind her.. She glances back and see's nothing
"hmmm, creepy tonight" she thinks to herself.. Of course almost every night in this po dunk town is creepy .. Small town USA and none of the typical church going type approve of me. I get yelled at, made fun of, and people put milkshakes on my car... ****ing hick boys. It was never like that in New York.. Why did Dad have to lose his job and move here, to Illinois of all places? ever since mom died it just gets worse.. If is wasn't for Elle, I'd probably have..." She pauses as she stands, with the jumbled books once again in her arms.
"Yeah great, my only friend and I make her wait in the cold for 3 hours. I'm such an idiot" attempting to make up for the time lost, Amy begins to jog the rest of the 3 blocks..
"Uphill sucks" she thought "and these books are heavy" she crosses the street, "2 more blocks" and then
"Ummmph!" What the!?!?! something had slammed into Amy from the side flatting her and tossing all her books sky high.
"You ass!" she yells, then tried to roll on her back to get a look at who is was, but before she could even get turned around it was on her.. Heavy and close to her face.. This awful stench.. "Get off me, get off me!!!" she screams while trying to hit the person and wiggle from under it at the same time..
Smack
her head was slammed against the pavement, neck strained to the side, as the assailant put his hand over her mouth. The figure leans in.. That awful stench again.. Amy's eyes try to focus.. She struggles..
"Can't breath...." And just as she musters the strength to try to turn away to get air, it bites her..
"Oh my god.." She screams in her head... "oh god.."
"I'm going to die"
Back in the ally, Elle is still pacing.. She looks at her watch and says
"Screw it" she starts to walk to the corner.. She's going home.. She's been here for hours, she'll catch Amy another time.. Elle comes around the corner.. Looks to the left as she turns away to walk down the hill.. Then she hears .. something.. She snaps her head around.. And a pile..a jumble of something, moving in front of her, a few blocks ahead.. Wait no.. a man on top of a girl.. A girl who looks a lot like Amy..
"Amy!!! Oh god"
she runs.. Like she has never ran before.. Never that kind of running..
"Here I was sitting around in the ally and Amy is out here getting raped.. " she scolds herself as she runs.. It took only seconds it seemed to clear to two blocks to where the man and Amy lay, and since it was downhill the momentum was good.
"Half a block..and all that martial arts is about to pay off in a big way she thought" Elle used all her strength, and just as she reached them, stepped to the side, swung her back foot around using the momentum, and kicked that ******* smack in the face.. She had knocked him clean off of Amy.. Blood splattered on the side walk, and it was all over the mans face..
" I must have kicked him hard she thought" assuming the blood was from the guys face, not Amy's neck.. She jumped over Amy, just as the man was turning to get up she balled her fist and drove it into his face.. Grabbed his shirt pulled him up and did it again..
"*******, *******, *******!" She kept hitting him.. then a sound.. What was it? She punched again. Then it registered to her that a car was coming..
"A car", she thought.... "Good.. Help.." She put all her power into one last punch, and spun to flag the car.. But she noticed that Amy was still laying on the ground, not moving..
"What the ****?" she thought..
"Amy, are you ok?" She saw the man get up, out of the corner of her eye.. then he saw the car.. Looked at her, then the car.. Then turned and ran.. Elle kneeled by Amy, so much blood.. On her neck? From the mans face?... Not from the man.. From Amy..
Clad sang along to the stereo...
"I Stand Alone, Feeling Your Sting Down Inside Me.."
One hand on the wheel and the other slapping the dash to the rhythm.
"I'm Not Dying For It, I Stand Alone.."
Suddenly someone darts in front of his car.. Clad stiffens and he slams on his breaks..
"Oohhhh ****!!!" Fish tailing, he comes to a stop inches away form this girl..
"Jesus Mary and Joseph!!! what the hell are you doing??" He demands as he jumps out of the car to confront the girl he nearly turned to road kill..
"my friend" she says gasping
"you've got to help my friend" There's blood on her white-ish sweater, and laying a few feet away is another girl on the side walk.. Before he could move the first girl was back at the injured girls side.
"Amy, hun, your going to be ok.." She was putting her hands on the girls neck
"come help me! We need to get her to a hospital!!" The dark haired one demanded
"ah ah.. Yeah.. uh.. What.. umm..sure.. Just a.. let me.. " Clad studdered while standing there in shock.
"open your back door for christ's sake!, help me get her in.."
"Yeah, yes" he jumped into action.. Flinging open the door and scrambling to help put the girl he now knew as Amy in the back..
"We have to go, we have to go NOW."
Clad paused for a second.. The was a lot of blood.. A lot.
"Drive!!!" the dark haired girl yelled as she pointed to the steering wheel and closed the back door.
"Yeah.." he ran around the car.. Amy and the other were inside now.. He jumped in the seat, slammed it into drive,. Tires squealed, and the car began to move before he even got his door closed..
"Fast" he thought as he glanced in the rear view
"I need to go fast"
"What did he do to you.. What did he do?" Elle stared at Amy's face.. So pale.. Elle was in the back seat cradling Amy's head in her lap, putting pressure on her wound with one hand.. And trying to get a pulse with the other..
"Damn it.. Damn IT!!" Elle cried..
"What? What??" the guy in the front asked..
"What the hell happened?"
"I don't know.. I don't know.. I can't get a pulse.." Elle was shaking now.. It was all so terrifying.
"Is she breathing?" the guy asked.. Straining to see them in the mirror.
"I don't know.." Elle yelled..
"Snap out of it" she thought.. " you can do this, think, come on think"
she did her best to stop the shaking.. They were getting close to the hospital, she put her hand in front of Amy's nose and mouth..
"A breath!?! Was that a breath??" She paused.. Holding her own breath.. And again she felt it.. Ever so faint.. But it was there.. She was breathing.. Elle's heart jumped.. God at least she was breathing.
Clad was speeding,
"Ok, ok" he thought, "almost there" He saw the hospital emergency room entrance.
"It hasn't been that long, I got here really fast.. As fast as I could" He told himself as he turned sharply into the parking lot.. He looked in the rear view and saw the dark haired girl bracing herself as he turned..
"****, **** so sorry.. God I am just trying to get there and.." he tried to put on the breaks gently, but it ended up jerking quite a bit. The girls lurched forward, but he didn't stop to finish his apology.. He jumped out of the car and yelled..
"Help us!! Somebody help us!!" he saw a nurse coming, but didn't bother to wait. He ran to the back door and started helping the girl pull Amy out.. It was the first time he saw what was wrong.. He saw why the other girl kept covering Amy's neck.. It was awful.. He paused from the mere shock of it, just staring.. The girl noticed his pause, and he thought for sure he would yell at him again.. But she didn't. He saw she was crying a little.. She just kept trying to get the girl out by herself. Then the nurse shoved him out of the way.. She yelled
"we need a stretcher out here!!" And was helping the other girl prop Amy up against the car as two more nurses brouht out a stretcher.
"Good lord almighty" the nurse proclaimed and motioned for the others to hurry.. The three nurses put Amy on the stretcher and speed her into the hospital leaving the other two standing outside..
The Dark haired girl stood with an exhausted expression on her face as she watched her friend get wheeled away. She let out a breath, and put her hands on her face. Clad didn't know if she was crying, he wanted to go and comfort her, to ask if she was ok. but he couldn't bring himself to move.. He just stood there. They both just stood there.