Question How Could the Twilight Reveal have been Better?

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Personally, I thought the Twilight reveal was a fun read (#35), but I really doubt it will wind up making sense. So how would you have done it?

Here's mine:

Twilight is the real Angel, no mojo in play. Wesley found a loophole in his contract which allowed Angel to take temporary charge over him (like he did with Eve) because there hasn't technically been a successor as CEO of W&H LA.

At this point, Wesley informs Angel that activating all of the Slayers has unbalanced the world, and the Senior Partners themselves are acting as the counterbalance, and are months away from being corporeal on Earth in their true form.

At first, Angel's thrilled to hear this because he thinks it will open the opportunity for him to kill them. But Wes quickly lets him know that with the power they've been gathering, they'd be 40-stories tall, unkillable, and able to bend reality to their will with no effort. They'd in turn destroy most of humanity, and enslave the rest.

The team conjures up Cordelia, and she sadly confirms Wesley's assessment. With a heavy heart, the three (plus the rest of Angel Inc.) decide the only way to save the world from complete destruction is to kill most of the Slayers to rebalance the scales. Angel decides not to inform Buffy to keep her hands from getting dirty, thus donning the mask. And Cordy imbues Angel with the most ancient powers of TPTB,

Spike is infuriated by the plan, but when Angel asks him if he'd rather let the Earth be destroyed instead, Spike has no response. Then Angel asks Spike who he thinks the first to die would be if the Senior Partners did become corporeal. Spike reluctantly says the Champions, the Slayers. With no better plans, but still furious, Spike quits the team and disappears.

#36 picks up with the same Spike-reveal, but with the audience unsure of which side he'll be helping.
 
I think that it would have worked better if the Senior Partners had somehow divided Angel and Angelus into two entities, then imposed Angel's character into Angelus. That way, you would have basically what Spike was in the latter half of Season 5 and Season 6. A vampire who was in love with Buffy, but who had no moral restraints whatsoever, which would make all of the death, destruction, and chaos that Twilight has caused more believable, plus it would give Angel the ultimate escape clause: He didn't do anything, ANGELUS DID!
 
I have to agree with both of you. The Twilight arc just doesn´t make much sense at this point but i´ll wait till the next issue before i decide what to do with it.

I´m really curious about the Riley one shot. I hope we get some answers from it regarding Twilight. And i wonder if Riley knew it was Angel all along?
 
Here's mine:

Twilight is the real Angel, no mojo in play. Wesley found a loophole in his contract which allowed Angel to take temporary charge over him (like he did with Eve) because there hasn't technically been a successor as CEO of W&H LA.

At this point, Wesley informs Angel that activating all of the Slayers has unbalanced the world, and the Senior Partners themselves are acting as the counterbalance, and are months away from being corporeal on Earth in their true form.

At first, Angel's thrilled to hear this because he thinks it will open the opportunity for him to kill them. But Wes quickly lets him know that with the power they've been gathering, they'd be 40-stories tall, unkillable, and able to bend reality to their will with no effort. They'd in turn destroy most of humanity, and enslave the rest.

The team conjures up Cordelia, and she sadly confirms Wesley's assessment. With a heavy heart, the three (plus the rest of Angel Inc.) decide the only way to save the world from complete destruction is to kill most of the Slayers to rebalance the scales. Angel decides not to inform Buffy to keep her hands from getting dirty, thus donning the mask. And Cordy imbues Angel with the most ancient powers of TPTB,

Spike is infuriated by the plan, but when Angel asks him if he'd rather let the Earth be destroyed instead, Spike has no response. Then Angel asks Spike who he thinks the first to die would be if the Senior Partners did become corporeal. Spike reluctantly says the Champions, the Slayers. With no better plans, but still furious, Spike quits the team and disappears.

#36 picks up with the same Spike-reveal, but with the audience unsure of which side he'll be helping.

My goodness, I'd like that far better than what it's appearing to be. 🙁
 
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How Could the Twilight Reveal have been Better?


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The whole Twilight thing could have worked better if we, the audience, had known who Twilight was all along but Buffy and co. did not. Then we could have got little snippets of his story to learn how he got to the point of becomeing Twilight and then, by the time we got to the present stage of the story, we would understand Angel/Twilight better and it wouldn't be so confusing or unbelievable. (I undertand that because of the opposing comic book company thing why this wasn't possible though.)
 
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I agree it would have made for a better story, but imo it would have made even less sense. Twilight doesn't speak at all like Angel. "Who wants to die first?"
The whole Twilight thing could have worked better if we, the audience, had known who Twilight was all along but Buffy and co. did not. Then we could have got little snippets of his story to learn how he got to the point of becomeing Twilight and then, by the time we got to the present stage of the story, we would understand Angel/Twilight better and it wouldn't be so confusing or unbelievable. (I undertand that because of the opposing comic book company thing why this wasn't possible though.)

I agree. This is why Buffy worked on tv and as Joss has said the key to a truly great villain is them having a point. We are so confused/in the dark as to what Twilight's point is that it is almost impossible for us to understand and appreciate what is going on.
 
Yeah i hate the fact that there was this huge reveal, and 2 issues later still none of it makes sense. Its kind of weak tbh and its annoying having to wait for so long to find out what the hell is going on.
 
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