I'm releasing an EP next year!

[Joshua]

So I'm releasing my debut EP next year called "Not Good Enough 4 Me" and I'm releasing one of the tracks I recorded which is a demo version so far it's on soundcloud.

http://soundcloud.com/jo-h-a/kicking-screaming

it's a cover of an Ashlee Simpson song! What you guys think pls?! I know I'm not a good singer.

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Here's a final version
http://soundcloud.com/jo-h-a/kicking-screaming-edit

 

[Living Dead Boy]

Well, ok, now. For the record, demos are rarely better than the final copy. There are some exceptions to the rule, but the final version's are usually more polished (at least they should be.) So, with that being said, the page wouldn't let me go to the final version, but the demo version? DEEFFFFFINITELY needs to be improved. You sound like you weren't into the song, like you were bored or something. Or that you were just practicing the song as opposed to actually singing the song. But it's all good! I'm in the process of looking for a band to play for myself (I'm a singer). If you're really serious about this, and I mean really serious, try A LOT harder. Nobody's perfect. Best of luck my amigo! 🙂

 

[BuffyElevated]

I can't listen to the file right now but can I ask... If you think you're not a good singer why would you want to release an EP?? Not trying to be mean; I'm genuinely interested.
As soon as I get back to a computer I'll give the song a listen. 🙂

 

[Cast No Shadow]

I had a listen to both, and I appreciate how much effort you've put into these, but I think the end result comes off a bit messy, a few seconds into the final version you cough, and it just seems a little bit rough around the edges.

It's great that you're passionate about something and have ambitions, but I'd say walk before you run, maybe get a few singing lessons to build on what you have and the same with the guitar lessons.

 

[BuffyElevated]

It's great that you're passionate about something and have ambitions, but I'd say walk before you run, maybe get a few singing lessons to build on what you have and the same with the guitar lessons.

I agree with [MENTION=11317]castnoshadow[/MENTION]... I really appreciate that you're working toward your dream, but I really think you should invest in some voice lessons before trying to go professional. The "final" version (I didn't get to listen to the original) still sounds very rough... In all kindness possible, I think you need to work a little bit at it before releasing anything to the public.