Innocence Lost- PG 13

Angels baby101

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Ok so after much thinking, i've decided to ATTEMPT to write a fanfic lol... Never done it before but the merrick RPG made me wanna do it. Its a Xander/Dawn fic so hope ya like it here it goes...

Chapter 1 & 2

Chapter 1
Dawn pushed open the door and lay her bag down, it had been a year and a half since Sunnydale was left as nothing but a giant hole in the California earth. Dawn was now 18, finishing up her last year of Highschool, the move to Italy, slowed her down she fell behind, She grunted as she scrambled through her bag grabbing her notebook, a pen and her History book. As she sat on the couch to start her work, the phone began to ring... she quickly jumped up to answer it.
"Hello?" Dawn's soft voice spoke into the phone, Her eyes widened and her unemotional face suddenly sprouted a wide smile as Xander spoke to her on the other end. "Xander! How is africa? Find any new slayers lately?" Dawn was thrilled to hear Xander's voice.. it had been months since she last spoke with him.
"Well I'd say its fine but... I left Africa weeks ago, I was needed elsewhere." Xander replied breathless as though he had just ran a mile. Dawn crinkled her eye brows and put her hand on her hip..."Oh you mean they've found more slayers?", Dawn had been looking through her history book while talking to Xander, looking at pictures of the old locations...She smiled while she listened to Xander talk, Barely even hearing the knock at the door, Dawn picked herself up off the couch laying the book on the coffee table, Phone still glued to her ear. She reached the door and began to unlock it, "Yeah well thats great... Maybe now you can relax and take a break with out having to worry about where to find the newest slayer." Dawn replied into the phone, she pulled back the door slowly dropping the phone as she sets eyes on the 6 foot something rather tired looking Xander.
"Yeah well Relaxing is the plan Dawnie, Just hope you dont mind if i do it here." smiled Xander wrapping Dawn in a tight hug, She couldn't believe after all this time he made his way to Italy to see them. "Of course I dont mind! Oh Xander you have no clue how much i've missed you!" Dawn's cheeks were starting to hurt from the huge smile she had on her face, she sighed as she finially pulled away from his hug. "Buffy's not home right now, she went out with her new guy... she said she'll be home around 7 that is if you dont mind waiting here with me." dawn said as she lead Xander into the guest room to put his stuff down, Xander just smiled and shook his head. "Towels are in the Bathroom Closet, along with sheets and washclothes. I've learned how to cook since i've been here so if you want... I'll make you a sandwhich or something while you clean up."... Xander agree'd to her suggestion taking some clothes from his bag, he walked to the door Dawn told him was the bathroom and looked back. "Thanks Dawnie.." He smiled at Dawn once more and shut the door.
When she could hear the water running she quickly rushed into the kitchen pressing herself agianst the fridge and taking a few deep breaths... she had been so excited since Xander had called she hadn't really gathered all the events in her mind, Dawn had a crush on Xander back in sunnydale, they had gotten closer right before the huge battle agianst the first, then when sunnydale was destroyed the entire scoobie gang split up in search of new slayers. Dawn Hadn't seen Xander since then, now that he was back she felt the old fimilar feeling of Warmth and understanding as she had felt back in Sunnydale, The last year and a half had been so hard on Dawn... New school, New country, New friends. Plus the knowledge of everything she knew in Sunnydale was no longer there. Dawn shook her head of all her saddening thoughts and openned the fridge taking out some things to make Xander a sandwhich with. Dawn put some chips on the plate with the sandwhich and placed it on the table, she pulled out a chair and waiting for Xander, Moments later he emerged from the bathroom entering the kitchen his hair still wet. Dawn took in his faint fresh scent and smiled..
"Ok so i'm not much of a cook yet, i'm still learning i figured that ham would do you for now." Dawn giggled, as Xander took a bite of his sandwhich, flashing a smile to Dawn and swallowing hard. "Yeah its great, Thanks Dawn.", He quickly finished his food and looked up at Dawn she looked different from the last time he had seen her, More mature somehow. Xander rose to his feet throwing the paper plate in the trash he brushed off any crumbs left on his hands and turned to Dawn looking at his watch and sighing. "Well its only 4 here.. that means we still have about 3 hours until Buffy gets here. So what do you say.. you show me around this place?"

Chapter 2​
Dawn giggled breathlessly, as the returned to the 4 bedroom house Buffy and Dawn now called home, Dawn had showed him a few of the local wonders of Rome Italy...such as The Trevi Fountain, and Piazza di Spagna more commonly known as the Spanish Steps. Two of the most beautiful spots rome had to offer. "Thank you for that wonderful tour Miss Summers." Xander jokingly spoke to Dawn, Maybe it was just the sights of the Romantic City... but as Xander looked at Dawn he no longer saw his best friends Kid sister, who he used to babysit and joke with... Instead he saw a beautiful, Mature Young Adult. Xander took in the creature before him, He beautiful bright blue eyes, Her soft glowing complextion which had darkened a bit from the last time he saw her, Her small waist, long legs and voluptuous hips filled her jeans out in all the right places... Xander suddenly snapped back to reality. How could he look at Dawn that way, He had known her since she was a kid, and it was Buffy's little sister. "Whats wrong?" Dawn asked him looking at him with a raised eyebrow, he quickly shook his head saying nothing was wrong he was just tired, "So if its ok with you, I think i'm going to take the next hour or so till Buffy gets home to go rest. Besides looks like you still have homework." Xander replied quickly, smiling and nodding toward her books sprawled out on the coffee table. Dawn sighed, as she looked at her books looking back to Xander and smiling, "Yeah History of Italy is not my best subject." She giggled slightly then wrapped her arms around Xander hugging him tightly agian. "I'm so glad your here Xander. I dont know if i've told you that... but i really am.." Xander smiled as Dawn told him this and wrapped his arms around her hugging her tighter... "Me to Dawnie, Me too."
Xander smiled as he pulled away from Dawn kissing her on her forehead as he had done many times in the past, this time it meant more he didn't know how it just did, He then turned and walked to his room, shutting the door behind him tossing himself on the twin sized bed and sighing looking up at the ceiling. Xander hadn't slept much since Sunnydale his thoughts plagued by Anya and how he lost her. Tears formed in his eyes but he refused to let them roll, he began thinking of the things that made him happy. For some reason Dawn's face came to his mind, he smiled as he thought of her. The fact he was thinking of Dawn still bothered him a bit but he just couldn't stop, He thought of the way her hair framed her face, How her nose sometimes crinkled when she laughed, How good her perfume smelled when she hugged him. Stop it. Stop it now. Thats Dawn your thinking of Buffy's little sister. How could you even think of her in this way. he thought to himself trying to get rid of the thoughts of his best friend's sweet little sister. It was wrong he was too old for her for one, and for two Buffy would kill him. Xander closed his eyes breathing deeply, not realizing how tired he really was he slowly drifted to sleep. Xander smiled as he held Dawn in his arms, he kissed her cheek gentley as he stroked her beautiful wavey brown hair. Dawn smiled back up at him warming his heart. "I love you Xander. I always have...I cant believe this is real." she looked down at her hand, around her small ring finger on her left hand was a beautiful tiffany setted Engagement ring. Xander smiled and turned her face toward him, "Anything for my girl." Dawn smiled looked down once more before turning back toward him, slowly moving toward him...her lips an inch from his. Xander was awaken by a knock on the door, he gasped for air for a moment clearing his throat. "Yeah give me a minute." He got up from the bed running his hand over his face as he reached the door he pulled it open and smiled at the view that greeted him.
 
Old Master 3.0
Old Master 3.0
Not bad at all for your first attempt. In fact it's excellent.
Wanabee-slayer
Wanabee-slayer
Great you know I'm with ya all the way sweetie
Oopsie. I meant to rep you, but hit the wrong button and sent you a page instead. 😛 My apologies.

Anyhoo, as I said, very good start. Please continue.
 
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Angels baby101
lol its quite alright thanks hun :)
Part 3

Buffy smiled at Xander as he openned his bedroom door, suprised as he threw his arms around her. "Xander, Its so good to see you." Buffy said her voice alittle strained from her throught being pressed agianst Xander's shoulder, she looked him up and down when they parted from their hug. "You look great Xander, the eye patch has really been working for you." he smiled and shrugged his shoulders " Well it has attracted some pretty hot numbers, like a very blood thirsty Vampire I met in Africa named Tapiwa. Tried to feed me to her Tribe." Buffy laughed at Xander's misfortune, he had always been a demon magnet of some sort so it was no suprise to Buffy he got himself almost killed because of a female Vampire. Xander followed Buffy out to the living room where he noticed Dawn sitting on the couch watching some italian t.v show. Dawn quickly noticed Xander and stood up. "Buffy and I talked about what we should do for dinner and we decided since its your first night here... to let you decide, what to do. As long as it invovles going out." Dawn giggled and Xander smiled as her nose crinkled. "I'm thinking Italian since i got to see the sights today, i'm hungry for some pasta of some sort. Gotta love the noodles of rome." They quickly grabbed their jackets and headed out the door closing it and locking it behind them. "The restraunt is only 3 blocks down, two blocks if we cut through the park." Buffy stated as they began to walk across the street to the park. They entered the south gate of the park, Buffy hated it because it was the darkest area of the entire park and she had to live right across the street from it. Xander quickly pulled a stake from his jacket as he heard a rustling noise, Old habbits die hard. Glancing at Buffy he noticed those habbits hadn't died off from her either as thier was a nice long wooden stake in her hand as well. They walked the path in pure silence, When Xander noticed Buffy put her stake back into her bag, he followed her actions putting his stake back into his jacket pocket. " You can take the girl out of the hellmouth, but you cant take the hellmouth out of the girl." Xander mocked as they came out of the darkened park onto a pretty well lighted street. "I'd rather be safe then sorry...The restraunt is just up around this corner They have great lasangua." Buffy replied as they turned the corner and the restraunt came into view. Dawn had been silent pretty much the whole walk, she was still just so happy to see Xander and she knew he and her sister wanted to catch up, Xander openned the door to the restruant holding it open while Buffy and Dawn entered taking their jackets off as they walked in hanging them up on one of the coat hangers by the door, Xander did the same... the waiter then seated them in a table near the back. "So Xander how long are you staying exactly?" Buffy asked while skimming through the menu. "Oh i dont know a couple weeks, maybe longer... Tired of me already?" he replied quickly... Buffy smiled and shook her head, Same old Xander she thought to herself as the waiter came up, speaking Itailian of course, Buffy replied back in some rusty itailian herself, "Its ok ma'am i speak english." Buffy sighed and smiled, they placed their orders and handed him the menu. "If you need anything my name is Josh."
He nodded and walked away...

PART 4​

Buffy, Dawn and Xander sat at the table, stuffed from eating the wonderful food, Xander had ordered some wine for the three, that they were finishing up while catching up with the times. Dawn yawned slightly and Xander smiled. "Let me just pay for the check and we can get going, I'm getting tired myself." Xander said finishing in a yawn aswell. Buffy tried to protest but he took the check slipping in a credit card and handing it to the waiter. Moments later they started toward the door grabbing their coats and started to head home. Talking and laughing about old times as they entered the park, Buffy leading, followed by Xander and Dawn staggered behind tired. They had been having such a good time neither Buffy nor Xander thought to grab their stakes, till they heard Dawn scream. They turned around to see her being shoved into a brick wall knocking her out cold, Xander grabbed his stake and went toward the vamp, throwing a punch to the Vamps midsection, the Vampire replied with shoving Xander hard head first into the brick wall and falling beside Dawn. Buffy charged at the vampire, sending blows of her fist to his face, and midsection, he replied with a blow to her jaw, she grabbed his arm twisting it and flipping him to his back, She quickly drove her wooden stake into his cold unbeating dead heart watching him turn to dust. Buffy walked over to where Xander and Dawn lay... Xander grunted as Buffy helped him to his feet. They looked down to Dawn who was still knocked out from the wall. Xander leaned down and picked her up in his arms, he wobbled a bit as he stood back up, still dizzy from hitting his head on the wall. Buffy gripped her stake tighter as they continued their walk back home faster and more aware. Buffy quickly unlocked the door letting Xander in first he walked to Dawn's room and laid her on the bed. She had a cut on her forehead blood was seeping out, Buffy got the first aid kit and sat down on the bed next to Dawn cleaning the wound and putting a bandaid over it. Xander looked down to Dawn who was motionless in the bed, He hated to see her that way even with just alittle cut he knew she would be ok.. But it was Dawn... he would take every bit of pain away if he could, even the littlest cut. Buffy covered Dawn with a blanket at the end of her bed, Xander smiled then turned to leave the room, Buffy followed closing the door behind her. Yawning Buffy hugged Xander quickly "Its really good too see you Xander, I hope your all settled in. Good night" She smiled and walked off to her bed room shutting the door behind her. Xander stood for a moment by Dawns door before turnning and walking off to his own room shutting the door, He quickly undressed himself and put on a pair of sweat pants before crawling into the bed.. he laid looking at the ceiling for a few moments before closing his eyes and drifting off to sleep. Walking through the house, Dawn smiled as she reached the kitchen seeing Xander at the table eating a bowl of cereal and reading the newspaper, she walked over and wrapped her arms around his neck "Good morning." she said tiredly. Xander smiled and turned kissing her softly on the lips, "Morning Dawnie." he replied as she sat down beside him pouring herself some coffee. "I dont have to work tonight so i made us reservations at our favorite restraunt, is that ok?" Xander asked between bites of his cereal. "umm yeah i have to be to work by 12 but i get off at 4." she replied unhappily. Suddenly Dawn stood in the lobby of their favorite restraunt she was dressed in a classic black spegetti straped dress with alittle lace at the bottom, and a long black coat over it, Xander took her coat handing it to the coat checker, he held his arm out waiting for her to lace hers with his, as she did so they walked to their booth and sat down. They had ordered their food, while waiting Xander stood and held out his hand, Dawn lightly took it with her own as they made their way to the dance floor, He wrapped his arms around her small waist as they glided across the floor, suddenly a spot light shone on them and Xander dropped to one knee... "I thought about doing this at a zoo or maybe the circus but i decided i'd do this here instead. Dawn I love you... I've tried not to. I've tried to forget you but nothing works Part of me doesn't want to ever forget you or ever stop loving you. Will you marry me.. Please?" Xander asking pulling a ring box from his pocket and openning it to see a beautiful tiffany setted Engagement ring. Dawn felt tears fall down her cheeks as she smiled and said yes. Xander placed the ring on her finger and stood taking her in his arms and kissing her passionatly. "I love you... oh i love you." Dawn replied as he held her to him. Dawn shot up breathing heavily, she looked down to her finger. It was all a dream she thought to herself disappointed. Dawn had a head ache from being shoved into that wall earlier that night and the cut on her head didnt feel to good either, Dawn threw the covers off of her and stood up she walked to her door, openning it and sticking her head out looking down the hall, she quickly walked to the kitchen and poured her a glass of water, taking it back into her room she took a sip and set it by her bed before climbing back in. Dawn looked at her finger once more before doozing back off to sleep.
 
Sorry i aint posted nothing in a while... i'm on vacation and i forgot to post the part i did write before i left... i'm currently writting it over agian... hopefully to post by wensday of next week 😀
 
Part5

Xander woke up with the morning agian finally deciding that today he'd buy some heavier curtins. Groggily he stumbled out of bed and dressed... he took a look at himself in the mirror before openning his bedroom door and starting down the hallway... He felt the urge as he past by Dawn's door to check in on her but decided it be best not to. As Xander Entered the Kitchen he saw Buffy reading the Obituaries, and drinking some morning Coffee's. "Heya Buffster.... Any unexplained missing Dead people?"
Buffy looked up and smiled..."I guess you really cant just stop being a slayer....Everytime i've tried they just find me anyways."
Xander sat beside Buffy with coffee in hand... "Buff.. Its part of who you are... you are THE slayer." Buffy looked to Xander and shrugged.. Xander gave her a quick hug... before backing off when hearing Dawn's tired voice. "Morning." Xander smiled and Got up to look at her head... "Morning Dawnie... How's that feel? Any Better?" Shrugging her shoulders Dawn poured her a glass of Orange juice and sighed "Still hurts alittle bit... Nothing major... Just dont remember exactly what happened." Buffy stood and put her coffee cup next to the sink before walking over toward the living room. She turned to face her little sister while she grabbed her coat. " I've been called into work... Viviana called off agian... Try not to annoy Xander to much, and be sure to study your math." Buffy quickly grabbed her purse and rushed out the door before Dawn had the chance to complain. "She still treats me like i'm glass sometimes." Dawn grumbled as she finished her orange juice... "Thats just because your her little sister Dawnie." Xander replied as he put his coffee cup beside Buffy's and walked into the living room taking a seat on the oversized couch. "So Dawnie wanna watch a movie? Since i'm guessing your over playing board games with the old Xanmister." Dawn raised an eyebrow at Xander then rolled her eyes... "Xanmister? Anyways ya a movie songs great.." Dawn smiled as she walked over to the movie cabniet picking out Fast and the Furious which see had seen over a dozen times but still loved it plus it wasn't a chick flick like most of the movies were. "Hows this?" Xander nodded to Dawn's question and smiled as she placed it in....she walked over to the couch and sat Down pressing play on the remote.

Part 6​

Xander smiled down at Dawn who was cuddled up to him, the movie was nearing the end and Dawn had fallen asleep about half way through... Xander gently pushed a strand of long brown hair that had fallen into dawn's face as she slept. Her breathing was deep and peaceful, Little grunts escaped from her mouth as she slept. Xander admired her beautiful features from her beautiful formed cheekbones, to her soft lips. He held his breath in as she squirmed a bit getting even more comfortable. As the movie ended and the credits began to scroll Xander reached for the remote but stopped suddenly amazed by what he had heard. Dawn had mumbled his name in her sleep. His face wore the expression of intrigue as he continued to watch her sleep. A slight smile had formed across her lips, Xander slowly lifted her head and removed himself from the couch before gently placing her head softly onto a pillow he had behind his back. Taking in one more look he moved into the kitchen and looked out the window Replaying what he'd just heard... She was probley just dreaming of sunnydale... no problem. he had convinced himself it was her dreaming of fighting evil with the old scooby gang. "Xander?" Dawn had woken up and didn't see Xander next to her... she was worried he decided to leave town with out saying goodbye... she smiled as he came rushing into the living room... "Well look who it is...Good afternoon sunshine." he mocked as she straightened out her hair..."Is the movie over already?" Xander laughed alittle and nodded.."You fell asleep about half way through." Dawn's eyes widened then she took a deep breath "I didn't drool did I!?" as she finished her sentence she wiped off her mouth just incase... Xander just shook his head "No you were a non drooling, non snoring, sleeper." Dawn sighed and smiled replying with a simple "good"... She stood up and straightened out her clothes.
 
Wanabee-slayer
Wanabee-slayer
Definite DAnder rep needed
wow i haven't updated this in a while lol

Nah i'm not a professional writter infact this is the first one i've ever attempted to do.. Thanks for the compliment i am gonna write more to this
 
ok due to a deal with Jess i am resurecting this story lol and theres gonna be new people comming into the deal too so this chapter introduces 4 important people

CHAPTER 7
Xander couldn't help but think about Dawn mumbling his name for the rest of the day.... he knew it was probley just a dream about Sunnydale or something but deep down he wished it was more then that. Even as they all sat down for dinner in the Summers residence it plagued him as he kept looking up at her from his plate catching her eye even now and then. "So Buff how was the work?" Xander blurted out from the quietness, Buffy smiled as she swallowed the food in her mouth and taking a sip of water before answering, "It was fine, there was a few small problems but otherwise it was fine.. What did you two do today?" Xander shrugged and looked at Dawn who was just fiinishing up her 4th peice of the hot cheesy pizza. "Well first we watched a movie then went and got tattoos." Dawn giggled as her sister kinda choked on the pizza for a moment... before letting out a just kidding. After dinner was finished and the paper plates were thrown in the trash Dawn rushed to her room to get ready... it was saturday night and she had plans with some good friends from school they were all going to a club. "So Dawn's changed alot in the past year... How are you handling it?" Xander asked as him and Buffy sat on the couch watching t.v "Its hard... I mean being in a new place with new people... expecially on her. It took her a while to get adjusted...she's still behind on her schoolwork." Xander reached out and placed his hand on Buffy's "She's a summers' girl... she'll be fine... unless of couse she blows up the school." with a smile Buffy quickly hugged her best friend and thanked him before their attention was quickly turned to Dawn who had emerged from her room ready for the club life... "There is no way your going out in that!" Dawn quickly rolled her eyes and crossed her arms "Buffy i'm 18! besides theres nothing wrong with it..." Buffy quickly looked to Xander for help... he took this time to eye Dawn up and down with out being suspicious, he felt like the heat was turned up instantly... there Dawn stood in a short mini skirt, haulter top and some pumps, with a blue jean jacket over it... she looked at least 20 in this outfit..."Buffy is right if you wear that out... some old pervert is going to eye you like candy." Realizing he was talking about himself and thinking of what other guys would think made him crazy. "but everyone dresses like this here! Come on i'm 18 and we're just going to a club.... its no big deal." just as Dawn finished her sentance there was a knock at the door and she quickly ran to get it... moments later 4 other teenage girls entered the room and Dawn began to introduce them. Angelina was the first to be introduced this girl looked to be at least 22 she was about 5'5 in height, like Dawn she had curves in just the right places, she had long red hair that was filled with waves and beautiful big blue eyes, she was followed by Isabella who was tall probley about 5'11, she had a small athletic body not really any curves, Short Blonde hair and brown eyes, then there was Caprice a bubbily girl who had a little weight on her she was probley 5'6 and had straight brown hair that was up in a pony tail at the time, and last but not least Sofia was introduced now she looked much like Dawn when Dawn was 15.. Straight brown hair, blue eyes, tall, slender... each of them were dressed like Dawn in miniskirts, tanktops and heels... and all said their hello's when they first walked in. "Everyone this is Xander..." with that all the girls smiled and almost all of them at the exact same time just let out an "ooooo" which made Xander curious as to why the oooo? "Ok Dawn you can go but be home by 12? I need your help tomorrow with some stuff." With that Dawn smiled and gave buffy and Xander a hug good bye before heading out the door.
 
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Parsel Deletriu
Absolutely wonderful first attempt ;).
Faith Rose
Faith Rose
I love it post some more, I want to know what happen next.
Hey, where's the rest? 😛. You really should continue this story. I'm not much of X/D fan, but this story is pretty good 😉.
 
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Angels baby101
Thanks I'm going to try to write some more too it soon. Work has been kicking my ass lately lol
*breathing like Darth Vader....*

:vader1: The prose is strong in this one. 😛


Keep on going. You're improving every time. :: tu ::
 
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Angels baby101
Thanks OM :D i've gotten a nother chapter so far but i'll post it when i get a few done
I love it! I have only read the first two chapters but it is amazing! I will read the others later!!!
 
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