Jamie Hunter, November 1994 [ Completed ]

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Jamie, the 15-minute Slayer
By Allycat


EXT. CENTRAL LONDON - OXFORD STREET - DAY

EXTREME LONG SHOT: TOP DOWN VIEW OF THE STREET

This is Oxford street: a big and busy street in the centre of London. On the sidewalks we can find shopping people.

(SUBTITLE)
London, Saturday November 12th 15:54​

ZOOM IN ON ONE OF THE CARS.

It's an older white BMW.

CUT TO:​


INT. BMW - DAY

TWO-SHOT FROM THE HOOD OF THE CAR.

Two people are in this car. There's an older man, the driver, a watcher called HENRY, and next to him is sitting his slayer in-training, a young blonde girl named JAMIE.

HENRY
So, I say to this other watcher, Rupert. This girl that I'm
training, she's-...​

He looks at Jamie, who is pushed back into her seat by some invisible force. Then the force lets go. She holds up her hands and starts inspecting them, amazed.

HENRY
What? What's the matter?

JAMIE
I can feel it... the power, it's... amazing?​

Henry happily looks at her; she looks back at him, pleasantly surprised.

HENRY
Oh my god, you've been called!?! You're a Slayer now.​

Then Jamie turns back to look at her hands and at the same time look straight ahead.

ENTER SLOW-MOTION

Jamie looks unpleasantly surprised.

JAMIE
(In a low slowed-down voice.)
Watch the road!?!​

Henry turns to the road and quickly (although this is still very slow to us) tries to steer away. Jamie holds her hands to protect herself.

FADE TO WHITE.​

The screen is completely white. We hear a loud crash. Then in the distance some more. People are screaming. Moments later we hear ambulance sirens.

FADE TO:


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

There's a bunch of about 10 to 15 wrecked cars on Oxford Circus, the crossing of Oxford Street with Regent Street. Amongst them is the white BMW. Some cars are on fire and smoke is coming from others.

FREEZE FRAME

FADE TO WHITE.​


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

A first ambulance reaches the site of the crash with an extreme speed and barely manages to stop in time to crash into the other cars.

FREEZE FRAME

FADE TO WHITE.​


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

More ambulances have reached the site and also police cars and fire-fighters. The paramedics are running across the scene.

FREEZE FRAME

FADE TO WHITE.​


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

One FEMALE PARAMEDIC is running to the scene, when suddenly he stops and looks over to the side.

SHOT PANS AROUND A BIT

A LITTLE GIRL, crying, is revealed standing by the bloody body of a young woman, her mother, obviously dead.

FREEZE FRAME

FADE TO WHITE.​


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

Bobbies are holding off the crowd and getting them to back away, so the Ambulances have more room.

FREEZE FRAME

FADE TO WHITE.​


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

A pair of fire-fighters is at the white BMW. One FIRE-FIGHTER trying to cut the left door out.

FREEZE FRAME

FADE TO WHITE.​


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

The door is lose and the fire-fighter pulls it off. Then he tries to drag JAMIE out. As he does, her body becomes visible to us. Her right side is smashed; it's partly burned and all bloody; her lower leg is missing.

FREEZE FRAME

FADE TO WHITE.​


EXT. OXFORD CIRCUS - DAY

The firefighter is carrying JAMIE over his shoulder and carrying her away from the site. About 30 feet away from it, he lays her down on the ground. A MALE PARAMEDIC hurries over to her and tries to stop the bleeding from her missing leg.

MALE PARAMEDIC
You awake girl?​

Jamie is moving a bit and her eyes are open.

MALE PARAMEDIC (CONT'D)
Okay, stay with me hear. Talk to me. What's your name, girl?​

He's still working on her leg, but the bleeding doesn't seem to stop.

MALE PARAMEDIC (CONT'D)
Damn.

JAMIE
I am... Slayer.​

Then Jamie coughs up some blood and finally stops breathing.

MEDIUM SHOT: TOP DOWN VIEW

The MALE PARAMEDIC sighs and then walks of as we...

ZOOM OUT TO AN EXTREME LONG SHOT.

Some of the ambulances are leaving with the wounded, while others are only just arriving.

FADE TO WHITE.​

(SUBTITLE)
London, Saturday November 12th 16:09

JAMIE
(whispering)
I... Am... Slayer!​

FADE TO BLACK.​

THE END







Acknowledgements: Okay, in case anybody was wondering how I did this so fast. Yes, I wrote this before I got permission. Figured if I got refused, I could always just post it in the regular fanfic section. And yes, I also know this is kind of an not so very conventional slayer-story, but then... that was kinda the point, wasn't it? Anyway, I hope you liked it. Also, Screenplay format doesn't work too well without HTML allowed, but I guess you'll manage.
 
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Cordelia
good job!
Ha ha. That was cute, and a little poignant at the end.

I can just see Quentin Travers at Watcher headquarters in London when he gets the news, "Bloody Hell. We lose more damned Watchers that way". 🙂
 
Nice one Ally - talk about coming back to the BB with a bang 🙂
 
Just like the slayer/whore in Destructo Girl's story, some situations are inevitably going to occur in the history of the Slayer line. It's obvious that some Slayers were lost due to non-work-related mishaps. Very well done change of pace! And, up yours, Quentin Travers!😉
 
Okay, I'm late, reading this now, but I liked it and wanted to comment. I like the idea, and it's pretty tragical yet somewhat comical, eh. Good job.
 
excellent fanfic, ally!
it was so different to anthing else we seem to read!!
well done!
 
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