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I think that's a really great idea, really, kudos.
Though, I'm not too sure about the opening idea ("do you want to go out tonight?" "no I can't I'm watching Dollhouse" "why do you want to watch Dollhouse?" or something among these words). I think it sounds really cheesy, like one of those 90s ads : "Oh my God, your shirt is so much whiter than mine ! Why is your shirt SO MUCH WHITER than mine ?" "My shirt is so whiter than yours because I use SuperWhiteningShirt, the new product that will make all your shirts whiter than his!" stuff. Besides, it makes Dollhouse fans look like some sorts of geeks, doesn't it ? The "I can't go out and socialize, I have to watch TV" type. Let's not forget Fox is watching the DVR numbers as well, if we could get people to DVR Dollhouse, it would be just as good.
And I'm not much into the first reasons that were given : Paul half-naked, girl-on-girl kissing... Huh... Do we really want to give that image of Dollhouse ? I mean, I can see one of the reasons being "Well, Eliza, DUH!" and "Well, Paul, DUH!", but it would have to be drowned among other more serious reasons.
That's just my opinion, please don't take it the wrong way, that's absolutely not what I mean. It's just I think this is such a great idea I want it to succeed, because that's kind of a responsibility : if it fails, it could take some hesitating potential viewers with it !
Though, I'm not too sure about the opening idea ("do you want to go out tonight?" "no I can't I'm watching Dollhouse" "why do you want to watch Dollhouse?" or something among these words). I think it sounds really cheesy, like one of those 90s ads : "Oh my God, your shirt is so much whiter than mine ! Why is your shirt SO MUCH WHITER than mine ?" "My shirt is so whiter than yours because I use SuperWhiteningShirt, the new product that will make all your shirts whiter than his!" stuff. Besides, it makes Dollhouse fans look like some sorts of geeks, doesn't it ? The "I can't go out and socialize, I have to watch TV" type. Let's not forget Fox is watching the DVR numbers as well, if we could get people to DVR Dollhouse, it would be just as good.
And I'm not much into the first reasons that were given : Paul half-naked, girl-on-girl kissing... Huh... Do we really want to give that image of Dollhouse ? I mean, I can see one of the reasons being "Well, Eliza, DUH!" and "Well, Paul, DUH!", but it would have to be drowned among other more serious reasons.
That's just my opinion, please don't take it the wrong way, that's absolutely not what I mean. It's just I think this is such a great idea I want it to succeed, because that's kind of a responsibility : if it fails, it could take some hesitating potential viewers with it !
laianna
Completely agree with you.
Sweetescape
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