Last Three Words

freakydorky

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With my last dying breath

I call to you

As I fall under the pressure

The only thing I could do.

The last three words

That passed your lips

Swam through my body

From veins to fingertips.

My intentions were clear

My feelings were known

You nursed my tainted soul

And I knew I wasn't alone.

You're on my mind

As the bright flames consume

You're all I can think about

As I prepare to face my doom.

You believed in me

Knew I could change

Repaired a broken heart

And asked for nothing in exchange.

You saved me many times

From otherse and myself

In my fading heart

You're all I have left.

You always stood by my side

Even through a mutual hate

Out of my love for you

I begin to disintigrate.

Don't look back

I won't be around

It will be over soon

Six feet in the ground.

You'll pull through this

If you remember me and never quit...

The hardest thing in this world

Is to live in it.
 
wow, i can't believe i never read this before...this was really well written!
i liked it a lot!
 
Nice Spike poem...much better than William's efforts 🙂
 
I don't know a whole lot about poetry, but even so I found this to be quite lovely.

Good job. :: tu ::
 
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