'Miracles Can Happen' PG-13

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I'm still figuring out what to do with this so be patient...


Buffy undid her jacket and winced.
"Can I? (pause) Let me see." Angel said.
"Ok." Buffy responded. Angel turned around and sat gently next to her. He put his hand on her back and examined the cut. Buffy turned slowly around and pressed her lips to Angel's. She dropped her jacket as she ran her hand through Angel's hair. Angel broke off the kiss to allow Buffy time to breathe.
"Buffy," Angel whispered, "I don't think"¦maybe we shouldn't"¦"
"Shut up and kiss me" She replied and kissed him again, more hungrily than ever. Angel returned the kiss pressing harder on her lips. Buffy pulled from the kiss and then pulled off Angel's shirt.
"I love you."

~Ok"¦ok"¦just chill. It's not the end of the world, cuz I've been there and done that before.~
Buffy laughed weakly to herself as she paced up and down her room. She didn't know what to do. She couldn't tell her mom, she'd kill her. Buffy couldn't tell her friends, they'd freak. And she couldn't tell Angel. Buffy grabbed her coat and headed for the Bronze. Maybe some dancing and a ton of loud music might help her.
"Buffy? Are you going out?" Buffy's mom spotted her.
Buffy froze. "Uh"¦yeah"¦is that ok?" She stammered.
"Yeah it is , I just wanted to know. Have a good time, buh-bye hun." Joyce said waving goodbye to her daughter.
When Buffy arrived at the Bronze she found Willow and Xander talking.
"Heya, guys." Buffy said trying to sound casual.
"Hey Buffy. This song is great"¦wanna dance?" Xander said standing up and motioning toward the dance floor.
"Yeah sure"¦" She said looking over Xander's shoulder and spotting Angel.
Xander just stood there stunned as Buffy grabbed his shirt and pulled him onto the dance floor. They danced for a while, then sat and talked with Willow.
When Buffy left the Bronze she stumbled into Scott Hope, the boy who had been eyeing her for the last 2 weeks.
"Oh, hey Scott, sorry bout that. I'm klutz-o-girl today." Buffy said helping him up.
"It's ok, Buffy. Hey I've been meaning to ask you something." Scott pulled her aside and said, "Will you g-g-go out with me?"
Buffy blushed furiously and said, "Uh"¦yeah"¦ok."

Willow knocked on her door 2 days later.
"Hey Will, come on in." Buffy said opening the door. When they were safe up in Buffy's room Willow bombarded her with questions.
"Scott Hope?! Scott asked you out? You said yes didn't you? I'm so happy for you"¦aren't you happy? Why aren't you happy?" Willow hopped on the bed half-heartily. She looked over at Buffy who was crying now.
"W-w-willow"¦I need to tell you something." Buffy said sobbing and shaking violently.
When Buffy had finished her story Willow was silent with shock.
"Oh"¦have you told your mom? No"¦course not, stupid thing to ask. D-does Angel know?" Willow asked.
Buffy shook her head.

Buffy burst into Angel's apartment the next day.
"Angel! Are you here?"
"Yeah I'm here Buffy." Angel said. "What's the matter?"
"I have something to tell you"¦uh"¦" Buffy stuttered. "I'm"¦I'm pregnant."

TBC"¦
 
Another very good start.

If I may? Just relax, sit and think about your story....let the ideas come to you, and take proper shape and order in your mind. Don't rush things along just for the sake of expediency.....as you will end up with a two-dimensional story that you won't be very happy with.

We look forward to seeing the rest. :: tu ::




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Ok you got it! Thanks sooo much for the encouraging comments in all my fics.
I was up all night typing the second part and now I'm perfecting it! I just had writers block yesterday🙂
 
Good stuff. A bit jumpy all overy the placey...but really good. Can't wait for more...more please, soon, now? :bounce:
 
I'm personally with WS on this one, you have a great start Bubbles and I'd love to read more of this!

And you know, updating two years later, that's how to show your writer's block who's boss (and I know this because I am such a procrastinator 😉) Anyway, hope to read more sometime! 🙂
 
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