My First Song

Drusilla

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i've decided to start writting songs, it's probably not very good, but it's the first one, i've written so...
it's for my band, i play bass...this is just the lyrics to the song, as i haven't written the notes yet. this is just alittle bit of the song, i haven't finished writing the whole song yet.

it's written for a friend of mine. and it's about when a girl finds out her boyfriend has been cheating on her, and she's trying to find out why he did it.

Why?

You use to make
me laugh,
You use to make
me cry,
I need to find out
something
I need a reason
Why?
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Why'd you go and
break my heart,
I never knew we'd
fall apart,
If this is how it's
gonna be,
I'm leaving you,
you're not for me

i actually had two differnet parts for the last line, one was " i'm leaving you, you're not for me" and " say good-bye, i'm leaving you" ...which one do you think is better? i can't decide, *lol*

What do you think of the song?
 
Well...
"Say goodbye, I'm leaving you" doesn't exactly rhyme, but who says it has to? I personally like it better! 🙂
It's a good song so far....let me know when it's done!!!!🙂
 
Originally posted by JustAnotherFan
Well...
"Say goodbye, I'm leaving you" doesn't exactly rhyme, but who says it has to? I personally like it better! 🙂
It's a good song so far....let me know when it's done!!!!🙂

ok, thank you 😀, i liked that line better as well, i'll let you know when it's done 🙂
 
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