Original Serenity Script

Yea, I read this earlier. Cheers for the link Xander!

The people on the site who commented seemed to prefer it to the actual film! I think not. I think the shocking deaths of Wash and Book were so great because I didn't expect them. The whole idea that everyone could die, evident at the end of the film, wouldn't have had the same effect (or any effect) at all. On me anyways. Some of the cut dialogue seemed hilarious. But I still don't see how people can argue that it should've been kept in. Cuts had to be made.

There were however a few things that I wouldnt have minded seeing in the end product (I'm a hypocrite. kill me) Book being in it more, perhaps him beginning on Serenity, and still dying in Haven would've made it more enjoyable. There was not alot of screentime for the shepherd. Also anything involving Kaylee should've been kept. You can never have enough of her! Well I can't anyway... Some of the Kaylee, Simon dialogue should've been kept. 'Oh,. Doctor, you and me is gonna have such an awful lot of sex.'

But anywho, I think the end product was amazing. So there 😛
 
Gotta agree, I think it's so much better with the deaths. Although there is one bit I would have left in, it's not in that nut it's in the serenity official movie book. It's just after they discover the secrets on Miranda, and return to the ship. It's in the middle of Mal's we aim to misbehave speech, he says something like how far away is Mr. Universe, and river works out the distance in her head and she's all normal. I would have left it on, just cause it further shows that River is saner now, I think that could have been shown a little better.
 
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