Perrycareyrocks Stories, Sketches, and Ideas

So is Buffy in it at all? Cause if not, it's not a Buffy the Vampire Slayer movie. It would be titled something else. But it's an okay concept.

Edit:
Also, theWB doesn't own the rights to Buffy. 20th Century Fox does.
 
Buffy Summers is in "Buffy, the Vampire Slayer" and parts of "Angel: The Movie"
 
ILLYRIAN
ILLYRIAN
Hope you have better luck than me, when contacting 20 C fox, I tried for 3 years without a reply.
movie-fic!

Initiative Homewares.

Jake (the manager) is believed to be the first man, activated as the vampire slayer.
Harris has been with the Initiative since Buffy left them.
Buffy has just arrived, with Cordelia Chase.
Oz works in the store, with Harmony.

Buffy is neglecting to tell of Willow's "death".
Weeping in the dead white room.
Unable to control the magic, and reducing herself to a pile of ash.

During a conversation on "store-front behavior", Jake's head will jolt.
The computer software in his brain has just switched personality.
He would like to give Buffy Summers a tour of his underground facility.
 
Hi...

Hey. I'm just looking for some "approval"? It's part of ending an opening sequence.

She scrambles backward onto her feet and is hit by another wave-blast of key energy. She's getting lighter.
Buffy's body will be Ben's turning into Glory's at the construction site. Spike will be drinking the god's blood. It went to his soul, Buffy!
 
Why do you post it here in 'Check In'?
And as far as the opening sequence goes...I don't really understand it.
 
I agree with Social Suicide, perhaps we need more of the opening (like the whole thing, not just the ending of it?) or some clue as to what the story will be after this opening, as it is ... it doesn't really make sense.

Hi, though! 😀
 
erm hello???????? im not quite understanding erm much here but hello anyways hope you get your answers
 
Moved from the Check In forum as it was the wrong one...please take some time before posting to decide on the correct forum for your thread.
 
ILLYRIAN
ILLYRIAN
And how is that fan fic? I know my stories push the boundaries a bit, maybe you could start a new forum?
Is this funny?

Does it suit Angel?

Angel: Dawn takes the stage.
Singing, "Somewhere Over The Rainbow."
"That was beautiful." "I don't know. Lorne, did you get anything?"
"Very funny, you two. Seriously, this is going to be pie."
"I love pie."
 
Movie suggestions about the Glorificus story

I'm working on something that I've been sending in for two movie ideas. I want someone's opinion on the two demons that ruled with Glorificus (for Angel: The Movie). I'm thinking Mila Kunis as "The Serpent", and Julie Benz as "The Poison Apple", with Claire Kramer obviously playing "Glorificus." Julie Benz was a great Darla, but I haven't included Darla in my story. Those are just the two images I'm considering. Any suggestions?
 
Dear God# nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
*breathes* oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo




[HASHTAG]#Apologies[/HASHTAG] to believers that I have used his name in vain (although I might argue that it wasn't, it was a veryveryvery important message that I felt needed to be addressed.) 😀
 
What was that?

Angel said Dawn took the stage, while he was singing.
He then asked Lorne if it was funny.
Lorne replies yes.

But Dawn didn't do or say anything. You used two types of
speech format
1/ ANGEL: Dawn takes the stage
and
2/ speech marks.

Was Dawn meant to be singing ?

Was it funny? Not to me.
 
I don't et it. Sorry, but your style of writing is very confusing to me. You never really clarify WHO does something. And that makes it impossible for people to follow the story.
 
So you want some approval do you? I'd 'voice' my opinions but helpful and constructive comments are the rule, which stops me from making any comments.
 
this is off-topic.

I've been sending into 20th Century Fox.

Spike finds Buffy at the Bronze (New Sunnydale).

Spike comes in with vampires. Sees Buffy, making out. All would see Buffy making out (disgustingly) with the slayer who came in with the warning of the vampires (led by some blonde english guy). "Who do we have- oh my bloody-" "It might be. What do you think your doing here, Spike?" Slow vamp face, half way there. "Upstairs, now. Girls."


this is there. I'm not horrible at this, am I?
THat makes sense. Sarah Michelle Gellar making out with a super hot vampire slayer girl.
 
I'm missing too much context to understand exactly what you're going for here. And some of your English usage is funky. I see you're from Canada; are you from French Canada? I think what you'd need to do to really get some feedback is to go ahead and write out the whole thing in a fan-fic style and post it in the FanFic forum. Then we'll be able to give you better feedback.

Good luck! 🙂
 
Have you got written copyright permission from all the copyright holders?
Is the work solicited? If it isn't, it'll go straight into the bin before being read.
As the last post said, put it up here, but in script format. Or as close as you can.

A litery agent is liable to refuse that based on the bad grammar and bad punctuation.
If you want to write scripts, learn the craft.
 
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