Poetry (Not Buffy/Angel related)

[buffey]

Hi everyone!, I wrote some new stuff and thought I would post it . I have been writing poetry since I was a teenager.I am trying to get published with not much luck... Feel free to critique me, good or bad I'm a big girl,I can take it. If you like it I will post more every now and then. Its not the happiest stuff I've written but here you go anyways...Oh and I don't have a title for it as of yet. But I welcome suggestions for one...
Also If you want to post some poetry I would love to read it!

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touching feeling
grasping reeling
remembering all those nights
i held you tight
reliving the past
it went by so fast
nothing is forever
you told me
we'd be together
and our forever has gone away
how far can love stray
when hearts are breaking
hurt is in the making
and love is gone
our hearts heed
its own beating
this love has lost
and left us fleeting...
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t.stacy '02

 

[Drusilla]

wow, great poem 😀 i really hope you get published soon! and i can't wait to read more 😀

 

[buffey]

Thanks you Harmony! 😉 That very nice of you. 😀

 

[Drusilla]

no problem Buffey 😀 let me know if you get published!

 

[buffey]

Ok I will! 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😉

 

[Kennedy1]

Very nice. I like it.

I would like to post a poem, as well. It's basicly my thoughts in my head one night. No name.
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Why do I care what others think?
I claim that I don't, and that's my mistake.
I wish I could change the fact,
And quit running around with the world on my back.
Reactions don't make me,
So why let them break me?
It's time to get back on track.
What is it that I lack?
Is it faith?
Faith in myself?
Worried about the non-sence going on.
When I should be worried about my health--my well being.
So, oh well, who cares how you see me?
Time to stop trying to be "me" and actually be ME.
Reflections in the mirror are there.
But they are lying.
Reconizing what's deep down inside,
My true essence that I hide, has not died.
Letting it out, now giving it a chance to shine.
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[buffey]

Oooh Very Nice! That is good! 😀😀😀😀 Thanks for sharing!

 

[Drusilla]

nice poem The Oracle 😀 i love it as well!

 

[Evil Willow]

i sit......

i sit here lonley,
with no heart or soul,
wondering what to do next in my sad little life.
how can i have love for someone that hurt me so much,
so much feeling,
but very little touch.
i hope this feeling will go away,
to place in the back of my mind!
sazdragon 2002