Script Discussion Club?

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Is there any interest in having a discussion group centered around reading the scripts and then discussing episodes that way? I'm not sure I'm the best person to lead such a thing, but just wanted to gauge interest before thinking about it more.

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The most interesting scripts by far are the ones with the most significant rewrites and extensive deleted/censored scenes.

Hands down, the most extreme rewrites were for Never Kill a Boy on the First Date (Owen was renamed, no Angel and the whole showdown is at a bowling alley) and the version of Killed by Death with Angel pre-Angelus rushing Buffy to the hospital and an old lady monster posing as a patient who killed Buffy's grandmother instead of her cousin (note the similarity to the Plasmavore from Doctor Who's Smith & Jones!).

The pilot script is so much longer than the unaired pilot. It's got stuff like 600-year-old Heinrich Joseph Nest being the Master's name/age. So glad we were spared Buffy's diatribes about the history textbook being Eurocentric and Joss' favorite feminists that only university academia people would have ever heard of. So beyond out-of-character/touch for a teenager to talk like that. Joss' age and education was showing hard there in the most elitist, nauseating way. Keep that stuff to Sheila Rosenberg and Willow parroting her horrible mother, please. And most notable of all, Angel rides a motorcycle and stakes a vampire outside of the auditorium, which DB even mentioned filming during the 20th anniversary. Chris Boal is the name of the guy Darla stuffed in Aura's locker.

The mentions of Angel also weren't in the earlier draft of The Pack (Buffy/Willow at the Bronze and Hyena!Xander's taunts).

The funniest is the continuity error of blood on Gunn's lip from confusing Angel's blood for V8.

The WB's censoring of City of... left a huge dangling plot thread of two separate scenes (the girls in the alley and Doyle's warning about staying away from the humans he's trying to help) that were meant to lead to Angel tasting Tina's blood, ripping his hand out of his mouth and scrubbing his hands in the sink. It's one of the only deleted scenes besides the two AtS ones on the DVDs that even managed to appear in the episode's WB trailer! The City of... script still has Whistler in Doyle's place, as well as Angel being the only one to show up for Tina's funeral.

The infamous Corrupt is the other leftover of AtS' earlier, darker direction where Kate was an undercover prostitute with a drug addiction who actually propositions and feels up Angel at one point. Cordy's "Dark Avenger" commercial from the start of Hero was lifted from that script.

One of the most underrated deleted scenes was Rebecca asking Angel in Eternity about his physiology, which included Angel giving a whole explanation about vampire physiology being metaphysical, instead of scientific. It literally explains why so many things like vampire CPR (they can talk, but not breathe--lungs are shriveled next to walnut-sized hearts) and sex don't make sense scientifically.

1x07 has a ton more scenes with Joyce, including Buffy squirreling away her dinner for Angel, Joyce talking about thinking there was a mice infestation upstairs and coming home from the hospital.

Lie to Me has more dialog in the Bronze with Buffy and Angel. They discuss Angel being able to consume non-blood drinks.

The Harsh Light of Day has the much-missed dialog where Buffy admits that sleeping with Parker was all about proving to herself that she was over Angel (dismal failure).
 
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I think starting from the script and comparing that to what we got is an excellent way to analyze the show. You’ve got my vote! 🙂
 
I usually quote the foreverdreaming scripts. I used to use buffyworld but it is a two-step process finding your way to the wayback machine first.
 
It could be interesting, to read the script and compare what was shown on screen, count me in.
 
I've always loved & really interested in shooting scripts 🙂. Being a spuffy fan, I used to read some scripts to see how Spuffy scenes were different, also loved to see the descriptions. The old Buffy books with scripts has been on my to collect/buy list. Checking out shooting scripts of shows or movies has always been a pleasure of mine like the script of Scream (1996).
Makes me think I've always been disgusted that the shooting scripts of TVD are not on internet except the pilot.

You can also find in the shooting script of The Harsh Light Of The Day that Giles was desillusioned that Spike & Dru definitely broke up & was some kind of Spusilla shipper. I remember too that in Innocence shooting script that Buffy in class was dreaming of her night with Angel before discovering that he lost his soul.
 
Transcripts are not the same as scripts. Transcripts are usually written after an episode has aired by someone watching the film/show. Scripts are written by the screenwriter. I'm assuming we would be looking at the actual shooting scripts, that often have differences to what was actually aired, correct?

Here is a quick link to the archived buffy-world site: BuffyWorld
 
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@Cohen that would be my assumption as well.

Sort of like what “Lessons from the Screenplay” used to be about on YouTube, looking at the script on a literary level as well as seeing what was omitted or added and why.
 
Dumb question but 😅 the original scripts are in the bonus on the DVD, no ? My DVD have bonus, I never watch what they contain but I always assumed it was scripts.
 
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Yes, Passion & some others
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