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This is a VS I am currently working on and it may be picked up by MZP later this year. I just wanted to know if anybody has any opinions on it and that if you scroll down you can read the pilot!
Based on a world created by Joss Whedon
Read Pilot Below
[ftp]http://www.scribd.com/doc/2088912/Taunt-1x01-PilotThe-New-Girl[/ftp]
The Premise
In a quiet coastal community, the forces of evil are gathering and it is up to an unlikely duo of heroes to protect the town from that certain evil. The vibe of a great action adventure whispers promising through the air, but when our heroes scroll onto screen, that vibe is shattered like a monkey slinging poo. Our unlikely heroes are Davis, A well built athletically gifted popular but ditzy and naà¯ve sixteen year old. In the form of his sidekick, enters Matty Jones, the sexually unsure and gullible best friend with a flair for pointy objects.
The fate of the west coast lays in the hands of these two young men, and for the last year, they've been keeping up with their end of the bargain, but when a new beautiful, evasive and mysterious student by the name of Charlie enrolls into Port Harbor High, a set of events are set into motion and things will never be the same.
As it turns out, Miss New Student who also happens to be Beautiful, Evasive and Mysterious is a newly activated slayer who is on the run from her free-spirited and somewhat alcoholic watcher whose oh so Hippy name is Lilly.
Charlie's quest for independence from her watcher leads her to walk right into the one thing she never wanted, being a part of a team and even worse, attending public school.
Event by Event, Episode by Episode, Our heroes and Charlie must work together to solve puzzles, slay demons, and stay alive all while maintaining the perfect level of coolness that has come to be expected from heroes worldwide.
Perfectly walking the line between Drama and Humor, mainly through the use of snappy and oh so cool dialogue, this as of yet untitled series has something for everyone.
A mixture of spoof, satire, spiffy dialogue, and outrageous characters mixed with dashes of drama. Light hearted romp through the wonderful world of Joss Whedon.
A well built athletically gifted, semi-popular and naà¯ve sixteen year old who fights demons by night and attends a much more brutal scene during the day, high school. Davis is completely devoted to his best friend, and fellow partner of the night, Matty Jones.
The sexually unsure and gullible best friend with a flair for pointy objects. Matty is the type of person you would love to just hang up, though he does have an annoying habit of lying about things that aren't even important. He is also quite the distraction on the hunt, due to his constant babbling teenage mouth. Matty wages a constant battle to impress his seemingly absent parents.
A new beautiful, evasive and mysterious student who has just enrolled into Port Harbor High. Non-confrontive and as stated above elusive teenager who is not used to attending public high school must enroll when she gets stuck in the coastal town of Port Harbor. As it turns out, she wasn't running from an enemy, but rather from an Ally.
Lilly Stone is the ally that Charlie is on the constant run from. She is Charlie's free-spirited and somewhat alcoholic watcher who is on a constant mission to bond with her slayer but always fails miserably, either by doing or saying something completely wrong. She has good intentions, but you would never guess it by her behavior.
Sarah is the single mother of Richard and is always there for him whenever he may need her. She and her son talk about everything, even things he probably does not want to discuss, but having an open mom does leave quite a few benefits, why just last night, she agreed to pay him extra allowance money for every Vampire he slays. When it comes to the prospect of dating, she is very bitter for reasons best not discussed, lest you want a black eye.
Charlie's on again-off again, sometimes non-existent sister. A smart mouthed, curious teenager who always manages to get into trouble, that is when she does exist. She has no idea that sometimes she isn't around or real for that matter, but then again who does?
Miss. Smith is the local Port Harbor High School Enlish teacher with quite a few mental quirks which in turn will turn Charlie and the boy's high school lives into a literal Hell.
The chief editor of the Port Harbor High Newspaper, she is always on a lose-lose mission to discover what really happens when the sun goes down. While she's got some major writing skill, her investigative skills fall miles short of Sherlock Holmes and consequently she will probably never realize what truly goes down in this coastal town.
A vampire who shacks up at Charlie's house and refuses to leave. Mystery surrounds the past of this somewhat sissified vampire, and it is certain that his past holds many embarrassing secrets.
Episodes "“ (Currently based on a 13 episode season, but I am currently planning an expansion)
1x01 "“ Pilot/ The New Girl "“ Two teenagers who are best friends battle the forces of evil in a Coastal town by night and go to school by day; A new and mysterious female student by the name of Charlie begins her first day of school at Port Harbor High School.
1x02 - What whoah What, Now Say it Again Real Fast"“ Charlie's free spirited and somewhat alcoholic watcher shows up un-expectedly and claims the school as her territory. Matty gets caught in an embarrassing and suspicious situation as he prepares for his date with Charlie.
1x03 "“ Teaching Miss Alden and Driving Miss Lilly "“ When Lilly makes a snide remark about the boys' fighting capabilities, the boys boycott both Charlie and her watcher when they need their help the most.
1x04 "“ Ding Dong, What the firk ding blast!? The Witch is Alive? "“ When a witch suddenly and for apparently no reason casts a massive spell, Charlie is suddenly powerless, Matty cannont tell any more lies, Lilly loses her ability to walk, and Davis can no longer speak; The witch vows to break the spell, but only when the gang meets her ridiculous demands.
1x05A "“ Saturday The Thirteenth "“ While away at a school camping event, the boys get lost in the woods in the middle of a crisis and it is up to Charlie and Lilly, who is not in the best state of mind, to save the day.
This episode may be replaced with the below
1x05B - Edie britt Aint got nothing on me - The English Teacher (Miss Smith) is taken over by an attractive man hating demon and one by one she lures the young men of Port Harbor High into her grasps.
1x06 "“ You May be in My Body but You DO NOT Have Permission To Touch That"“ The four characters bodies are swapped in perfect time for Winter Prom, and more importantly, after prom.
1x07 "“ The Breakfast Club Doesn't even serve dougnuts? "“ The gang end up in detention, and while they are busy making new friends and enemies in the detention room, Lilly must deal with a threat on her own, she believes the teacher overseeing the detention hall is a demon; Rose lands herself in Saturday detention on purpose to write an article for the school paper about it.
1x08 "“ He's not Dracula, You're a Whore "“ Matty begins to fall for a resident vampire and goes on a date with him, but the vampire has other plans, As it turns out, Mr. Not Dracula is on the run from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and Miss Slayer of the century is right on his tail; Charlie figures this is her chance to impress THE slayer and resolves to take the vampire out before Buffy gets to him, but Matty doesn't plan on letting that happen. Special Guest Star: Sarah Michelle Gellar as Buffy.
1x09 "“ If It Was Made In Japan, then Americans probably like it - When a computer begins to make students commit suicide, the gangs attention turns to the Japanese film with a similar situation, Pulse, And Miss Nosey Reporter may be the person who cracks this mystery.
1x10 "“ See What Happens When You Forget to Knock On Wood "“ The gang gathers to celebrate Charlie's seventeenth birthday, but uncle Jesse unwillingly crashes the party when something goes hairy-ingly wrong.
1x11 "“ From the Darkness, The Big Bad Trips "“ After months of careful planning, a major enemy accidentally announces his plans to the gang and they handle it accordingly and take charge of the situation or make an attempt to do so anyways.
1x12 "“ Citywide Holiday, No Violence Day, No Mail Delivery, No Drinking "“ All vampires, monsters, demons, wiccans and any other supernatural beings all know that this is the one day in all the city where they are forbidden to be violent; In turn this gives the gang a break from their usual tactics to think about their lives and their relationships, but someone intends to break the rules.
1x13 "“ Ending on A Serious Note "“ The death of a loved one devastates the group and one of them embarks on a mission to kill those responsible all while the others try and find a way out of their own predicament.
Based on a world created by Joss Whedon
Read Pilot Below
[ftp]http://www.scribd.com/doc/2088912/Taunt-1x01-PilotThe-New-Girl[/ftp]
The Premise
In a quiet coastal community, the forces of evil are gathering and it is up to an unlikely duo of heroes to protect the town from that certain evil. The vibe of a great action adventure whispers promising through the air, but when our heroes scroll onto screen, that vibe is shattered like a monkey slinging poo. Our unlikely heroes are Davis, A well built athletically gifted popular but ditzy and naà¯ve sixteen year old. In the form of his sidekick, enters Matty Jones, the sexually unsure and gullible best friend with a flair for pointy objects.
The fate of the west coast lays in the hands of these two young men, and for the last year, they've been keeping up with their end of the bargain, but when a new beautiful, evasive and mysterious student by the name of Charlie enrolls into Port Harbor High, a set of events are set into motion and things will never be the same.
As it turns out, Miss New Student who also happens to be Beautiful, Evasive and Mysterious is a newly activated slayer who is on the run from her free-spirited and somewhat alcoholic watcher whose oh so Hippy name is Lilly.
Charlie's quest for independence from her watcher leads her to walk right into the one thing she never wanted, being a part of a team and even worse, attending public school.
Event by Event, Episode by Episode, Our heroes and Charlie must work together to solve puzzles, slay demons, and stay alive all while maintaining the perfect level of coolness that has come to be expected from heroes worldwide.
Perfectly walking the line between Drama and Humor, mainly through the use of snappy and oh so cool dialogue, this as of yet untitled series has something for everyone.
The Feel
A mixture of spoof, satire, spiffy dialogue, and outrageous characters mixed with dashes of drama. Light hearted romp through the wonderful world of Joss Whedon.
Main Characters
A well built athletically gifted, semi-popular and naà¯ve sixteen year old who fights demons by night and attends a much more brutal scene during the day, high school. Davis is completely devoted to his best friend, and fellow partner of the night, Matty Jones.
The sexually unsure and gullible best friend with a flair for pointy objects. Matty is the type of person you would love to just hang up, though he does have an annoying habit of lying about things that aren't even important. He is also quite the distraction on the hunt, due to his constant babbling teenage mouth. Matty wages a constant battle to impress his seemingly absent parents.
A new beautiful, evasive and mysterious student who has just enrolled into Port Harbor High. Non-confrontive and as stated above elusive teenager who is not used to attending public high school must enroll when she gets stuck in the coastal town of Port Harbor. As it turns out, she wasn't running from an enemy, but rather from an Ally.
Lilly Stone is the ally that Charlie is on the constant run from. She is Charlie's free-spirited and somewhat alcoholic watcher who is on a constant mission to bond with her slayer but always fails miserably, either by doing or saying something completely wrong. She has good intentions, but you would never guess it by her behavior.
Recurring Characters
Sarah is the single mother of Richard and is always there for him whenever he may need her. She and her son talk about everything, even things he probably does not want to discuss, but having an open mom does leave quite a few benefits, why just last night, she agreed to pay him extra allowance money for every Vampire he slays. When it comes to the prospect of dating, she is very bitter for reasons best not discussed, lest you want a black eye.
Charlie's on again-off again, sometimes non-existent sister. A smart mouthed, curious teenager who always manages to get into trouble, that is when she does exist. She has no idea that sometimes she isn't around or real for that matter, but then again who does?
Miss. Smith is the local Port Harbor High School Enlish teacher with quite a few mental quirks which in turn will turn Charlie and the boy's high school lives into a literal Hell.
The chief editor of the Port Harbor High Newspaper, she is always on a lose-lose mission to discover what really happens when the sun goes down. While she's got some major writing skill, her investigative skills fall miles short of Sherlock Holmes and consequently she will probably never realize what truly goes down in this coastal town.
A vampire who shacks up at Charlie's house and refuses to leave. Mystery surrounds the past of this somewhat sissified vampire, and it is certain that his past holds many embarrassing secrets.
Episodes "“ (Currently based on a 13 episode season, but I am currently planning an expansion)
1x01 "“ Pilot/ The New Girl "“ Two teenagers who are best friends battle the forces of evil in a Coastal town by night and go to school by day; A new and mysterious female student by the name of Charlie begins her first day of school at Port Harbor High School.
1x02 - What whoah What, Now Say it Again Real Fast"“ Charlie's free spirited and somewhat alcoholic watcher shows up un-expectedly and claims the school as her territory. Matty gets caught in an embarrassing and suspicious situation as he prepares for his date with Charlie.
1x03 "“ Teaching Miss Alden and Driving Miss Lilly "“ When Lilly makes a snide remark about the boys' fighting capabilities, the boys boycott both Charlie and her watcher when they need their help the most.
1x04 "“ Ding Dong, What the firk ding blast!? The Witch is Alive? "“ When a witch suddenly and for apparently no reason casts a massive spell, Charlie is suddenly powerless, Matty cannont tell any more lies, Lilly loses her ability to walk, and Davis can no longer speak; The witch vows to break the spell, but only when the gang meets her ridiculous demands.
1x05A "“ Saturday The Thirteenth "“ While away at a school camping event, the boys get lost in the woods in the middle of a crisis and it is up to Charlie and Lilly, who is not in the best state of mind, to save the day.
This episode may be replaced with the below
1x05B - Edie britt Aint got nothing on me - The English Teacher (Miss Smith) is taken over by an attractive man hating demon and one by one she lures the young men of Port Harbor High into her grasps.
1x06 "“ You May be in My Body but You DO NOT Have Permission To Touch That"“ The four characters bodies are swapped in perfect time for Winter Prom, and more importantly, after prom.
1x07 "“ The Breakfast Club Doesn't even serve dougnuts? "“ The gang end up in detention, and while they are busy making new friends and enemies in the detention room, Lilly must deal with a threat on her own, she believes the teacher overseeing the detention hall is a demon; Rose lands herself in Saturday detention on purpose to write an article for the school paper about it.
1x08 "“ He's not Dracula, You're a Whore "“ Matty begins to fall for a resident vampire and goes on a date with him, but the vampire has other plans, As it turns out, Mr. Not Dracula is on the run from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and Miss Slayer of the century is right on his tail; Charlie figures this is her chance to impress THE slayer and resolves to take the vampire out before Buffy gets to him, but Matty doesn't plan on letting that happen. Special Guest Star: Sarah Michelle Gellar as Buffy.
1x09 "“ If It Was Made In Japan, then Americans probably like it - When a computer begins to make students commit suicide, the gangs attention turns to the Japanese film with a similar situation, Pulse, And Miss Nosey Reporter may be the person who cracks this mystery.
1x10 "“ See What Happens When You Forget to Knock On Wood "“ The gang gathers to celebrate Charlie's seventeenth birthday, but uncle Jesse unwillingly crashes the party when something goes hairy-ingly wrong.
1x11 "“ From the Darkness, The Big Bad Trips "“ After months of careful planning, a major enemy accidentally announces his plans to the gang and they handle it accordingly and take charge of the situation or make an attempt to do so anyways.
1x12 "“ Citywide Holiday, No Violence Day, No Mail Delivery, No Drinking "“ All vampires, monsters, demons, wiccans and any other supernatural beings all know that this is the one day in all the city where they are forbidden to be violent; In turn this gives the gang a break from their usual tactics to think about their lives and their relationships, but someone intends to break the rules.
1x13 "“ Ending on A Serious Note "“ The death of a loved one devastates the group and one of them embarks on a mission to kill those responsible all while the others try and find a way out of their own predicament.
