Tess.

Angel's vision

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A young girl runs along a dark L A street.
"i'm late! i'm late" she thought. Her parents had wanted her to be home by ten but it was nearing eleven.

She neared the corner of her street, anxious to get home.
The excuses were filling up her mind: The teacher made us stay late...
I got talking and forgot the time..but each one sounded lame.
She was attending art school and balencing a waitressing job during the day to help pay the fees.

Three robed figures stood as she turned the corner.
Tess neared her street, but seeing them standing there she made her way to the oppossite side of the road to avoid them.

"It is time" one said.
Tess took a u turn as she ran up to her drive.
Suddenly a hand grabbed her mouth and one took her legs as she was lifted up

Tess struggled against them.
She kicked furiously as they dragged her away....

~~~

A sudden rush of adreneline came over her as she swung her body in a twist
Back flipping over their heads....

She landed then swung at the first one knocking it on teh chin driving it backwards...

Tess stilll angry yelled "didn't expect that did you"
I.Don't .Like. Being.Grabbed.!
She then swung her leg in around house kick tehn knocked it back snapping it's neck, bu the second one was already upon her, head buttin it wiht her head she then elbowed it in the chin snappin it's neck..and punced on the third...

it didn't stand a chance....three bodies lay there on the ground...she wasted no time in diving throuhg the front door....

~~~~


Inside her parents watched as she sneaked in...
Mother: where have you been !

Tess: I er got held up then i missed the last buss...and ...

Dad had joined her by then : You could of called.
Tess: I know but...
Mother: You should of Tess..we were worried don't do that again ok..?

Tess: Ok, i'll need to get up tommorrow so good night.
Dad: goodnight, but do it again and your grounded understand..?

Tess : Ok dad i get it.

She sulked upstairs..how was she to tell them what happend..?
And that she was actually out on patrol....?

Inside her room she dived on to her bed what were those creeps that ambused her earlier...?

~~~

Inside a dark room a figure waited the three who by now had materilaised before it.
It conjured a few words so they came awake
"you failed " it said in deep soft voice.
But you never knew what she was it was an unexpected surprise..."

"It could come in usefull...." one of them said.

"Yes..." the leader wondered out loud..it could.....it may help us speed up the ritual..."
Keep an eye out on her for now wait till the time comes ...."
~~~~

Tess dreamed as soon as she had hit the pillow...

She walked throught the shops at night wondering what was ahead...before her a robed figure awaited her ....beckoning her she followed...

i have to show you what is to come it said...

Tess said aloud what?

but before she could hear the answers she was in side a chamber strapped onto an alter three figures were chanting....she couldn't speak or move....

but saw a text book open she noticed it had some weired symbols on it...

Tess wanted to screem....



~~~


The alarm went off as she wroke up in sweat...breathing deeply she then got up and looked at the clock ...it said ten...

Oh no..she was gonna be late......

You had a strange dream last night didn't you..?

A voice said behind her.
Tess wurled around to see a badly dressed guy talking in a dodgy brooklyn accent.

"who are you?"

"The names Whistler and i am an emmissery of the powers that be..."

Tess: "the powers..? what?

Whistler: " Your the chosen one right..?
Tess: er yeah....had some dreams about hitting vamps so looked it up i wanted to get used to the idea.....i figured it out .....that way....
Whistler:"your smart, but i need to telll you something....
there is some things you need to know...

~~~~~

Next bit will be when i think up the next bit....could be a week lol...

Let me know what you think...
 
S
Schillaci
You should use a spell cha
Whistler looks at Tess then began:
There are many more of you out there since last year a great awakening of slayers.....After the First was defeated.
Tess: wait so your telling me there are many more..? I thought i was the only one..!
Whistler: Well you do have two that were chosen way before this, you appeared to ignore their calls...that is why the powers sent me to tell you.

Tess looked down guilty: I guess i thought they were wierdos trying to stalk me..i have been follewd quite a bit lately..amd i get touchy..especially when i find strangers in my room...

Whistler: Sorry i just arrived here when you wroke.Anyway about the dream you need to beware they will come back. The Demons you thought dead are still alive they can't be killed that way...

Tess: so the powers know alot about me huh..?
Whistler: yep that's why i am here to pass on the message.

Tess: well you can tell the powers thanks but i can take of myself thanks.

Whistler: Didn't think you couldn't i'm just here to help..
Tess: well your sneeking ion here is help enough i have to get to work nice seeing you.You will go whe i get back ok?

Whistler: wish granted if that's what you want.

~~~~

Tess wen tunder the shower feeling highly strung already who was he to sneek in here ! she thought indignantly.

Whistler thought after her you know more than you let on and left.
 
S
Schillaci
I accidently hit the enter key. :P What I was trying to write was that you should use a spell checker. Correct spelling isn't a necessity, but it increases the readability of any piece of fiction.
Tess let the tension leave her as the hot water soothed her.A sudden flash of being on the alter hit her agian but this time it wasn't a dream.
Back in the bedroom she wasted no time in changing then rushed downstairs
she never noticed the box full of things on the bottom stair as she went flying
"Mum!" Tess yelled, she'd nearly forgotten that the'd moved down here recently and that weeeks later her Mum was STILL unpacking!

Her mum yelled out from the kitchen "Tess, i hope you haven't broken anything!

Tess fumed: NO i haven't! gotta go now byeee!

She slammed shut the door as she raced down her drive she'd slept right through her alarm and only wrok went it started on the second alarm.
She wondered how she was going to get through work with this on her mind.
What was happening to her..?
Ahead she saw the bus aproach and hastilly ran after it.

~~~~~
Whistler glanced at the shop full of old books as he went in she's going to get into trouble like she is he thought so he felt he may aswell get some research done the powers were very vague in their messeges.
He went straihgt over to the section on rituals well he thought at least he now knows they are robbed and ugly...that really narrows it down...

he perused in the book he got off the shelf...after glancing about to see if anyoner was watching.

Inside there was many that refered to that type of demon but what he really wanted was the exact type.....

He noticed one that was dead for ages...it can be bought back by giving a sacrifice of great strengh..and has to young and pure....

Whistler wondered if that was what was being raised remembering what Tess had said...

But it wasn't enough he needed the demon that was stalking her...
his task was to keep Tess alive as she is needed elswhere...later...

~~~~~

Tess glanced around her and half with it stared noncommitedly into space....
Till acold shudder fell on her....a person was staring at her very intensly..

she then decided to get up rather quickly...."excuse me ! stop the buss!" she yelled as everyone stared at her with curious looks on their faces...

She fled rather fast as the buss had barely enough time to stop....

Behind her,her persuer was gaining and catching up fast....
she jolted as she felt a poke in her ribs....


~~~~~~
 
Tess wurled around and saw Whistler standing there : "We gotta go!"

Tess: I thought i'd told you.."

Whistler: sorry can't. The powers want you alive, follow me...

Tess: "where are we going?"

Whistler: " I found out something, your persuer we'll loose easilly just follow me i'll explain later.


They ran through the streets,turing at evevery junction zig zagging all the way.Tess protested she was going to miss work.

They ran till the persuer was seen no more, they slowed down.

Tess stood panting.she placed he hands on a nearby wall."what is it you found out..? she asked.

then suddenly "woah!" as she fell through the wall...

Whistler followed....

***
Elswhere: inside the demon lair a body lay on a stone slab.The demons garded it wiht every thing they had circling it all the time.

"soon she will rise again...our master!" one declared.


**
 
Tess found herself inside a cavern candles filckered around her ....
before her was a creature she had never seen before.

Whistler watched it moved from it's resting place and jumped down to greet him:"who desturbs the all seeing ones!" it shreiked.

Whistler: "I do i need some answers". He then showed it the page which he saw earlier.

Tess: "what is going on..?"

Whistler whispered: "you'll see...soon enough.."

The creature took alook at the image and cried out loudly it's reaction startled them both...

"that! no!" .....
~~~~
 
It's a good idea, and I like your characters, but I just can't seem to get past the grammatical errors. A lot of things are spelled wrong and the punctuation is off in some places. I can't tell the difference between a thought and speech, and it switches off between being written in script format and novel format.

Also, try adding a bit more detail. Flesh it out a bit more, but not overtly. Try adding little bits of detail that you normally wouldn't put, for starters.

I like this concept and I think you should keep writing.
 
Thanks Mesektet ra i really apreciate the feed back, i do get stuck accasionally, (hope that is spelt right) so if you have got any ideas that is ok, but i willl keep writing!
 
The creature had a turtle like head,and a crab like body.
Tess stood stunned.Her thoughts were all over the place.
The creature scared her everytime it spoke,she felt it's voice make her nerves tingle for all the wrong reasons.A shudder ran up and down her spine.
She pressed her hand on the stone wall to steady herself.I just wish it would stop speaking!. she thought.The voice was like metal against metal.

Whistler stood open mouthed with the book open before it as it continued to shreik.(spelling?)

He watched it retract a little.Whistler:"woah woah". His arms strech out in a defensive gesture.
Whistler: "I just wanna know what a "...he glances at the book he is holding.
"D'hura demon ritual is ..?"

Creature: "don't say that!"Shreiking again, flailing it's fleshy claws.
Whistler: "er why..?"
"they are a dreaded race, feared by most demon clans".
Whistler: "they aim to resurect something, and the slayer .."whistler pauses to to gesture to Tess, standing beside him..:"is their tool int he process."
Tess buts in.."How did you find this out..?"She looks at Whistler.

Whister: "I have my sources".
Tess frowns.A pregnant pause..then the creature begins it's speach..:"You need to find the amulet of Amoth.That alone will trap their souls inside.
The soul they seek to bring forth is unknown."

Whistler:"This is sounding complicated, you mean you don't know what they are resurecting but the souls can be trapped inside that amulet..!"
Ok the remains..?

Creature: "they shrivel to dust".

Tess yells suddenly:"wait how do i find them..?"
she spoke with a slight squeek, her fear very much evident.Adreniline being the only sourse of courage.
Creature:"They will find you!".

A flash of white light.Then...
They lie sprawled out over the pavement.The hot sun beaming down on them.
Tess moved her arms back then moving on her haunches, she gets up.Snatching the book off whistler, she begins to read:" D'hura rituals:a soul young and pure, a champion of the good, a life so young will bring forth
a soul lost and trapped...."


She didn't get to finish she sensed unease as a presense behind her was about to strike..she wurled around; "I get it now" she spat.
Tess: "your one of them aren't you your here to trick me just like every other thing in my life that isn't true..!"
She swings her leg to strike his abdomen, but he is stronger, he grabs her leg pulling her close...
Tess looks up: Whistler!" seeing both together..as Whislter appears panting from around the corner, shock an ssurprise in his face....
~~~~
 
Tess felt her breathing get more and more intense till gasps of air became small.Hands held her tight.Panic wavered, it ebbed as soon as it arrived.
A male voice was trying to soothe her.Then her vision cleared.Whistler's arms were holding her steady as her breathing came back in steady rythms.

"you had a vision, didn't you..your dreams are beggining to manifest in daytime".What'd you see..?"

Tess answered:" I was grabbed by you but there was two of you...but i felt that you were the one in danger not me it was as if i was you...then i saw the book..the one you were holding it said something about me .." Tess recalled the passage, with intensity.
"...then i saw you come round the corner..."
Whistler:"yeah got flown farther than i thought, you were standing there just panting like an astmatic....the passage i was going to tell you about when the time came.
I guess we'd best get down to business, find this amulet, then work out what to do."

Tess:"I guess my working days are over.. but thnaks to my "dream " that put paid to your sneakiness".(whistler at this piont made a "sorry look") she sighed heavilly, disapiontment overtook her, all her life she wanted to do something for herself be something
to make ago of her life, to prove that her life wasn't in dissorder like her parents were, they'd moved to L.A from Sanfrancisco to try and start again after her dad was caught playing away. Both her and her mum were devestated. She was not sure she could trust him again.
Now this stranger came in to her life and tore at her resolutions to not trust poeple so easilly.His easy smile and quirkey habbits made her want to laugh.
That was something she hadn't done in a while.

Tess smiles ruefully as he lead the way along the street.

***

In the far distence, a stranger hidden by shadows watches them go on.
it felt the time was getting near...
 
Both Tess and Whistler ran as they heard footsteps come nearer and nearer.
"drat! they sent the hounds after me! i shoulda known" he said as near to anger as he got.

"They wanna get you out the way i know, but there is two of us, only one so far, let's jump it, unawares, i used to do it all the time to my cousin." Tess answered.

Whistler replied, " I hope so, it can sense where we are."

****

1 hour earlier.

The demons grew restless, the leader stood before a misty presense.
"The one protecting the one we need is interfering too many times send the hound out, we'll get the girl and him at the same time, soon the time will be ripe for me too walk this earth once more.Too many bodies ahve died out,
not enough lifeforce to sustain me but hers is stronger. The demon power is enough, yes a Slayer, i should of known sooner."


"yes mistress". it responded.

the hound snarled as it strained against it's reins.

For too long she had been in limbo waiting to get a life force strong enough,
but since last week she had finnally found it, she smelt it as it resided up above her dwelling.

The estate agent had been most helpfull....her only contact in the world above had given her hope at last.
 
Part Two.

Alec Barns looked out of the window of his office, being an estate agent was the only thing he wanted to do, he eyed the busy street as people walked by, he didn't care how he got his money as long as he got it, and buisness hadn't gone well of late he had struggled, there was competition, form another across the street, and he had struggled to pay the bills, till a note had been dropped into his letter box asking him to meet them, he had obliged purley out of curiousity, and when he got to where the rondevous was, he was blindfolded by hooded figures, afraid he wanted to leave but they'd held him fast, as they lead him long, he could smell damp, and when they halted, he was told to stay still and just listen, " i know you struggle Alec, and i appreciate you coming here, i have a propostion for you. The voice had said. tell How did you know my name ..? he answered.
I have my resources.I need you to find me a young life when you do, in your buisness i'm sure you will contact me soon, and your buisness will i can asure you will get better. i need a contact to the world above..

Being greedy he'd obliged, and soon enough he'd spotted a family of one teenager and two parents, and persuaded them to take the house.Now he was laughing, he was doing so well.....



~~~

The misty entity wanted so badly for the girl to be bought to her, at first things were too early,the ritual was just starting,and she had no way of getting her underneath so the hound was one idea,The house was directly underneath her dwellings but they were in a dimention caught between worlds and she couldn't pass over, neither could her prey, there was a chasim, the hound was immune to such things, as the being called Whistler had appeared, she had to act.Fast.The hound would of been sent sooner rather than later, but he'd deliberatly got her away when the timing was right,she thought.Today,this morning she had wanted things to start. he will bring her body to me she thought, dead, the body could pass over, but she had to be patient.The ritual needed to be completed.First.
She looked over to where her minions were chanting the noise was very low but soon she thought soon....

~~~~

Whistler ran and ran, Tess followed, The hound snarled as it neared, Tess yelled, " Now duck!", Whistler dived into some bins nearby, (they chose the ally as a safe bet)
Tess ran up the wall, then flipped over the hound as it tried to grab her then
she landed on it's back as it struggled to throw her off she placed her fingers around it's neck, then twisted, they both herd the crack as it then fell to the ground, she slid off it's back smirking.

" we have more, my dear" a voice came from behind her.
Tess turned round to see another tied to a leash with the demons that had attacked her last night.

"I guess you could say we are kinda in a hurry so excuse us we ought to get going, nice pet, by the way."

She scaled the wall, as Whistler followed, behind them their persuers gave chase.

Up on the roof they heard snarling, Whistler pulled out a pouch and said " this is some stuff i picked up, awhile ago got me out of situations before, it will transport us outta here so hold on tight"

Tess held on as he flung it out onto the roof and called out some words in latin.

A loud bang followed then they landed in a private library.

"Whistler!" came a voice, you know it's rude not to knock."
Thay both wurled round to see a smartly dressed man stand with his back to them.
" we need your help, the amulet of Amoth i need to get hold of it you know where we can get it..?"

"That means you are up against D'hura demons right..?"

The person Whistler was adressing turned round to face him and Tess....
 
The room looked like it was built in the thirties, it had artdeco chairs, and crimson carpet, the book shelves were a dark oak.the curtains hung huge and they matched the carpet,the arch they formed made them look regal.
"My my it has come to this Watcher helping demons".
"well you aint one now i mean it blew up", Whistler replied.The former watcher stared at him, "In other circumstances they/we wouldn't help" he said pointing to Tess.
"I'm desperate" whistler anounced.
"So tell me what is the situation..?"
Whistler told him most of what had been happening, but he knew he couldn't trust him completly, that was how it was with the council and demons.

"I see," the former watcher replied, "well you can get hold of it but i will have a job persuading My Contact you are familliar with Giles..?
Whistler nodded, how could he forget last time they met it was because of Angelus.
"He can autherise you to get it from this place", he handed an address to him,
then "We have a temporary storage since that disaster"
"Thanks, Colin, i appreaciate it"
Colin winced, " Mr Guerdo if you don't mind," he said, " Just helping you puts me in an awkward situation".

"You are helping me not him technically" Tess put in, angary that this man was reluctantly helping.

"My dear the choice isn't mine to take" he said.

Whistler gave him a look that said 'Thanks anyway' and went over to the door, "I'll let myself out" he said, as both he and Tess walked out.

Waiting till the door was closed and that they were gone a while, the former watcher went to the phone, he picked up and dialled.
"Hello, It's me there has been a development, i have news of a slayer, and she is with Whislter, he paused then, "Yes i know, i will thanks.."
he put the reciever down.

~~~~~

Whistler walked along the street, with Tess not far behind, they were weary they may be attacked again, looking behind them every now and then, then they came to the place, it looked old, it was three stories high and had a huge arch over the entrance, it reminded them of old police buildings in the movies.
Whislter went inside along with Tess the building had a high ceiling with large glass covers candle shaped bulbs were inside adorning the high hanging leads they hung from,they were greeted by a woman in her thirties, she was short with glasses and had the librarian look about her.
"You are expected" she said, as she met them in the hall way.
"Follow me" they both looked at each other as they were led along to a side door, she opened it and inside was.............. Travers, and he was holding the amulet...
"How!" Whistler exclaimed, you your dead!"
Tess stood open mouthed, as she gave him a questioning look.
"what's going on..?"
Travers replied "we have much to discuss"
~~
 
You haven't been writing, missy. What's the deal here? 😛

How dare you leave us in suspense! (....said the Mod who never finishes his stories...... 😛)
 
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LOL OM sorry i have been very busy and drooling over DT so i'll get back to this shortly i am currently working on the next part plus i had to finish BS first!
Ok since i am being told off for leaving this i will continue
(lol)


Travers lead both Whistler and Tess inside the room.The door shut with a bang.Tess jolted at the sound.
"Sorry, the door is rather heavy and old and besides the hinges need fixing" Travers said by way of explaination. With a casual sweep of his hand he dismissed the incident and looked up at them both.
The room was very old fashioned with it's interior rather like an old school room it wasn't very warm, a cold breeze hit Whistler as he shivered.

Travers was watching him with an expectant look.

Whistler responded awkwardly by firstly nervously flexing his hands then he coughed and finally smiled but it wasn't a casual grin it masked his uncomfortableness with this Watcher, the question was how did he come to survive and what was his purpose..?

he sat down slowly on a nearby chair watching him, Tess looked across at him and followed suit.

Travers finally sat down himself and looked over at them.
" This here is very powerfull and we will be dispatching a suitable member to administer this amulet to the Demon you are being persued by.
It is afterall a council matter now" he added.

Whistler merely stared at him. He'd come this far and he was being dismissed.
He finally asked what was buggign him and he wasn't going to let him just avoid the explaination they both deserved, so he took a deep breath he knew it was sudden and since he didn't volunteer the infomation straightaway he
took the plunge: " How did you survive the attack..? and who or what is this
thing that is after us..?"
Tess stared at Travers with a questioning look and said:" Tell us please, cos i do need to kick it's ass, oh and no lying".
Travers stared back, contemplating something then he said: " My dear how is another matter, the question is what you or we are after is an old one, from the days when demons were on the earth before man. There have been reports of two old ones that have gone missing, one i believe was at Wolfram and Hart, the other was lost a very long time ago, it was being shipped back to england after it's remains were found here in this city."

Whistler felt cold at these words he sure wasn't going to let the same thing happen to her that happened to Fred.
He'd heard on the grapevine about Angel's perdicament, the abandonment of his sunnydale friends, when reports of an old one at W&H were rife he's phoned him up to know what was what and why he was working there.what Angel told him and that was with tears he could tell, by his voice,very much made him determined to help him because he needed all the friends he could get, because now he was loosing them faster then he was making them.

Tess replied: " An old one? what does it want..?"

" To live. Again." Travers said, with seriousness.

TBC
 
Old Master 3.0
Old Master 3.0
That's better. ;) :p Good stuff.
The silence hung in the air for what seemed like ages.
Tess blinked twice then, replied,"to live agian..? ok not that we didn't know that anything was up or something, but you see i see things in my sleep, dreams that have bearing on the future, i saw myself as apart of this ritual, and then he(pointing to whistler) turns up, and says i'm in danger, so we just get chased by these demon dog thingys and You just tell me that it is council matter and what just go away and let the boys do all the work..????, NO WAY, and we want that Amulet by the way, but first, we need to know how to use it".

Tess folded her arms in defience..then added, " Oh i forgot we need to use your liberary, and how did you survive the council bombing..? curious much and no BS please".

Travers looked at her, he was angry she could tell, and he looked like he was never going to answer her question.
Finally he stood up, and said in a cold tone, " My survival lets say was quick thinking on my part, i knew some strong magic that ensured it, but to leave and see all your collegues die, before you well that will stay with me, i had a choice to die or preserve the council, i chose the council's preservation, ok..?
and you use our resources..? we haven't much to go on, our resourses much of it perished, however we may test your worthiness to have what we do have, just to be sure."

The air could be cut with a knife..Whistler felt fury..then he too stood up....
 
Whistler fuming stared at Travers...."I bet you will, like you did with Buffy
don't think i don't know about that stuff with Glory so what's the deal here..?"

Travers stared back.." As Tess isn't working for us ..she rejected us we felt the need for her too earn our help"

Tess angry glared at Travers," I'll earn your help..? excuse me, but when is an emergancy going to be included in your games..? You have loads of slayers now, infact shouldn't you be willing to help em as much as poss..?
I feel a storm brewing infact i'm sure this incident is just for starters..so are you going to help or am i going to just help myself..?

Travers lips quivered and standing up at last he said, " Follow me, but don't think my ** isn't going to be on the line as you youngsters put it."

They left the room and followed a long corridoor that seemed to ge on for ages, the hallway was full of old pictures, and book shelves, that were probably for show thought Tess, as she surveyed it.

In front of them was a double oakdoors...Travers stood infront and rounded on them both," Only you two are to enter..i'm afraid" then he stepped back.
Tess looked at him, " what i said didn't mean a thing to you did it, you lied.."

Travers looked at her, " No it didn't and you would not of come willingly if i had told the truth, good luck", with that he vanished along the corridoor.

Tess eying the door stepped up to it, " here goes nothing" She said.

~~~~


Travers entered a rooom nearby and sat down in front of him sat another but was partly hidden by the darkness.
"The slayer is all set..?"

"Yes she is and we have Whistler too."

"Good".

~~~~
 
I accidently hit the enter key. 😛 What I was trying to write was that you should use a spell checker. Correct spelling isn't a necessity, but it increases the readability of any piece of fiction.

I know i have to do that, i look back and i am embarresed by my typos!
Thanks for that.
 
What? Nobody's reading this? Typos or not, this is a good story, and she's really trying! How's about showing the young lady some love with some comments eh? :: tu ::
 
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*awww shucks Om i rather smirked at his remark then well laughed my head off! they say that laughter is the best medicine! LOL
Part 3

The mist swayed this way and that she was getting impatient, very impatient, she was also getting very annoyed at her contact, he had shown her the girl true, and she did make the business boom, for now, but she wasn't going to make that last, but for now it would do.
The Hell hound was above ground sniffing her out, she could feel it moving about, her connection to the beast assured.
I want her now.......she thought but her impatience was going to hinder her plans she had to wait, her other contact had assured her that although the girl was inside the watchers council office that wasn't going to stop the process of things they just needed to be lead on just a while longer before the betrayal was found out.
~~~~

Tess's parents were sat worried by the phone, her employers had rung to say she hadn't turned up for work today, did they know where she was..? No her mum had said as far as she was concerned she'd left hours ago to get there.
They were waiting for the Police to arrive, her dad had phoned her mobile earlier only to hear some screaming in the background upon the connection..he had panicked then phoned the Police.

Both were silient, they'd just rowed, the slightest things set them off these days, each resenting the other unforgiveness lurked beneath.

~~~~



Tess opened the doors, then stepped inside, before her there was the same creature she'd encountered earlier in the day.

Both herself and Whistler gasped in surprise, "you.!"
Whistler stood mouth open like a dork, his badly patterned shirt had finally managed to free it's self from his trousers.

"I'm suposed to fight you..?"

It merely stood before her it's silence being the only answer to her obvious question...
 
Tess didn't know wether to laugh or cry This creature was meant to fight her..?


Whistler stood behind her, looking for weapons Whispering this thought.
Tess looked about her, the room was like gym, with a matt in the centre,
This must be a training room of sorts she thought.

The creature stood, awaiting her move.
"You know we are meant to be on the same side right.?" she managed.
It responded " I know but today we are not, my freedom depends on the outcome" it's voice making her nerves tingle.

"They kidnapped you..? why..? why now..why of all .."
"They have their own agenda, that's why" ,it said interupting her.
" I refuse to do it!"
"Then you have no Amulet!" it shrieked.
It then rushed her knocking her sideways, Whistler diving for cover...
Tess rolled away and backflipped herself up, stood ready for the next assault.
It ran towards her agian, she blocked one claw, but it battered her hand away, she then sidekicked it in the chin sending it flying back, but it gained it's posture quickley, then leapt up, over them, Tess saw she didn't have time to move away it was too fast,instead she spun avoiding it's claw, she sidestepped away then leapted up over it, landed on the matt at the sametime the creature did, Whistler ran outside, or at least he thought he could the door was locked; Damm he thought, then he saw Tess land on her back the creature hovering over her.....
Tess saw an opportunity, she yanked one claw back, as well as the other one holding them fast making it yelp, as she leaped yet agian over it using the claw as a leaverage, she landed on it's back, and with her free hand, snapped it's neck, it made a crunch noise, echoing in the room.

She got up off it's back and seeing Whistler fall through the door, followed him. Outside she noticed no-one there, except Whistler on the floor.

Inside the room she saw a door was open, as the creature was then whisked away by some men in black army gear.
"what's going on!" she said outloud.

"What is essentially my freedom" a voice said behind her, Travers stood before her but his appearance was grey, and he looked dreadfull.
"In exchange for your freedom, you got me to kill our only source..?"
Tess fumed.
Whistler glared at him, so what makes you think you will..? You working for her..?
" I think you will find your the final part of the deal" he said, reaching for him....Tess saw the hound then, as it leapt up.......she felt herself pass out...
mist was sprayed in the air...
"she turned me into a wraith i need your life to live..." Whistler watched helplessly as Tess was snapped up in it's teeth....
 
Old Master 3.0
Old Master 3.0
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