Billy_Blood
Potential
It's an idea for a comic book or a tv show that I've been working with for quite a while now. This is a prologue describing the back plot to this story, that will make it a lot easier to understand. It's pretty long, though all other parts of the story won't be as long. It's kind of like Buffy, so I think you'll enjoy it.
Anyway, it takes place in a fictional European country called Freakyland. It is small, but it has a very high standard of living. But, it has centuries of legends of monsters and demons. Which is rightly so, seeing how it lies atop a portal to hell( I know, I know, very Buffy like...)
In my story, there are 4 dimensions. Usually the only way you could get to another one is by magic, but there are rips in the fabric of the universe, and there just so happen that one laid right in the capitol city of Freakyland, Frake City. In a room in the palace of the king.
The 4 dimensions are Heaven, The Living Plain, Hell, and "The Dark Zone". The Living Plain is where we live. It is the only plain where our souls and bodies are together. When you die, the body stays here, but your soul goes on. If you were a good person, the Gods will allow to enter heaven. In heaven you have no physical appearance, and only are a soul. But not all bad people go to hell. Satan only allows demons and people who worship him to go to hell. The gods try to make hell a tortuing place to people, making them into ghosts, but the demons live it up happily. For bad people who aren't quite evil, they go to the last dimension, which has been nicknamed "The Dark Zone". It is a world in eternal darkness. The people here become Zombies. Though their bodies remain on Earth, they are still connected to their bodies. They have eternal life, and all they have to do is sit and feel there bodies decaying forever. And they hate it.
That's why they want to go to the world of the living. The Zombies are ruled by an old corrupt king and queen of an ancient land, that were killed when their citizen revolted. Over the centuries, they have adopted many zombies to rule as princes and princesses, but most recently, they have added a brother and sister who were killed in a gang fight.
The demons of hell used their powers to help the ghosts communicate with the zombies. The all wanted to get out of these dimensions the Gods had imprisoned them in. The hellians knew they could escape if they wanted through the portal in Freakyland, but there was something stopping them.
Every generation, the Gods placed 7 beacons on the world, inside the humblest people on the Earth. These people carried inside the power that would restrain all evil away. The demons knew what to do. The created a black ooze that, if it touched anyone, would take over their body, make them evil, and turn them into a monster. They would have the ability to transform in and out of their monster form, and continue on in their lives so nobody would know. If it took over the beacon holders, it would completely destroy its power.
The 7 holders were all over the world. There was 7 year old Daniela Wutar, of Freakyland. 10 year old Maria Capet of Paris, France. 12 year old Silvia Columbo of New York. 15 year old Francisco Gomez of Brazil. 20 year old Carl Barton of Australia. 30 year old Enlai Mao of China. And one more, who is from Africa, that I would rather not discuss because it would ruin the plot.The beacons were possessed by the ooze. They became evil. Though they hid it from every person in their lives, people started to notice that they were grumpier and meaner than they usually were. But, they had the ability to transform into a monster form.
The Zombies used the only small rip they had to Earth, into the heart of the Amazon rain forest. Only The Prince and Princess(called Justie and Scotia) and a hundred other zombies came to the invasion of Earth.
The zombies had super strength, though most regular them could be killed easily by a very strong human. The royalty even had the ability to fly and shoot energy blasts out of there hands.
They flew to find any humans. The first ones they found was a small village of the tribe "Lasoota". They were unknown to the outside world.
They began blasting the huts and killing people of this village of only 500 people. They killed only about 100 people, but, there was something there they didn't expect.
5 orphan children. There was Silvin, Tomto, Zelter, Poli, and Dehlia. Silvin was the oldest, 9 years old. Tomto was his brother who was 7. Zelter and Poli were twin 8 year old brothers and sons of friends of Silvin and Tomto's parents. Dehlia was the only girl, and was Zelter and Poli's cousin. She was 7 years old.
There parents were great warriors. But they never got to know them. They all died in a fight when they were all infants. They were raised by a friendly nurse. They never knew how there parents died, or who they were fighting. They had another friend, though. He was an outcast to the rest of the tribe though, because most people thought he was a monster.
He lived in the forest, and said he was 10 years old. His skin was green, he had fangs, and was 8 feet tall. The orphans would go out to forest everyday to play with their friend. He didn't know what he was, or who his parents were. His friends gave him the name Nermost, and that was the only thing he knew what to call himself.
All the orphan had amazing super strength which they couldn't explain. They could even fly and shoot energy blasts like the zombies. Nermost was super strong too, but not nearly close to what the orphans were. In truth, the orphan's great-great-great-great-great-grandparents were from another planet. They were from a super strong race, and they were planet explorers. They landed on Earth, and since they looked human, easily were able to get into the Lasoota Tribe. They married humans, and had children. Though by the time the orphans parents were born, they had forgotten all about their alien herritage, they still had the incredible strength.
When the zombies started attacking, they had no idea what was going on. But even though they were so young, they fought these mysterious enemies, because they had killed the nurse that raised them. They turned all the Zombie's troops into sand(which is all they can do because they are already dead), and hurt the prince and princess.
Justie and Scotia went back to the Dark Zone, and got more troops. They didn't tell the King and Queen though, because they knew they would destroy them if they knew they failed.
They went back and fought and lost again. They kept fighting for over 20 years, to present day. The orphans managed to destroy 10,000 zombies, while the zombies only killed 100 more people in the village.
Time travels differently in different dimensions, and the 20 years wasn't even a day in the Dark Zone. By this time, the orphan had already told the zombies everything about themselves. Yet they knew almost nothing about them, except that they were called zombies, and that Justie and Scotia were Prince and Princess of the zombies.
Then one day, the Prince and Princesss fired a huge attack at the orphans. They couldn't find there bodies any where, and thought they had been disenigrated. But really all that had happened is that their bodies has been blown about a mile away. They returned, and saw a huge amount of zombies flying in the sky. Silven and Nermost(the strongest of the group) followed them.
The Zombies were heading to Freakyland to continue their attack, and bring the demons into Earth.
Anyway, it takes place in a fictional European country called Freakyland. It is small, but it has a very high standard of living. But, it has centuries of legends of monsters and demons. Which is rightly so, seeing how it lies atop a portal to hell( I know, I know, very Buffy like...)
In my story, there are 4 dimensions. Usually the only way you could get to another one is by magic, but there are rips in the fabric of the universe, and there just so happen that one laid right in the capitol city of Freakyland, Frake City. In a room in the palace of the king.
The 4 dimensions are Heaven, The Living Plain, Hell, and "The Dark Zone". The Living Plain is where we live. It is the only plain where our souls and bodies are together. When you die, the body stays here, but your soul goes on. If you were a good person, the Gods will allow to enter heaven. In heaven you have no physical appearance, and only are a soul. But not all bad people go to hell. Satan only allows demons and people who worship him to go to hell. The gods try to make hell a tortuing place to people, making them into ghosts, but the demons live it up happily. For bad people who aren't quite evil, they go to the last dimension, which has been nicknamed "The Dark Zone". It is a world in eternal darkness. The people here become Zombies. Though their bodies remain on Earth, they are still connected to their bodies. They have eternal life, and all they have to do is sit and feel there bodies decaying forever. And they hate it.
That's why they want to go to the world of the living. The Zombies are ruled by an old corrupt king and queen of an ancient land, that were killed when their citizen revolted. Over the centuries, they have adopted many zombies to rule as princes and princesses, but most recently, they have added a brother and sister who were killed in a gang fight.
The demons of hell used their powers to help the ghosts communicate with the zombies. The all wanted to get out of these dimensions the Gods had imprisoned them in. The hellians knew they could escape if they wanted through the portal in Freakyland, but there was something stopping them.
Every generation, the Gods placed 7 beacons on the world, inside the humblest people on the Earth. These people carried inside the power that would restrain all evil away. The demons knew what to do. The created a black ooze that, if it touched anyone, would take over their body, make them evil, and turn them into a monster. They would have the ability to transform in and out of their monster form, and continue on in their lives so nobody would know. If it took over the beacon holders, it would completely destroy its power.
The 7 holders were all over the world. There was 7 year old Daniela Wutar, of Freakyland. 10 year old Maria Capet of Paris, France. 12 year old Silvia Columbo of New York. 15 year old Francisco Gomez of Brazil. 20 year old Carl Barton of Australia. 30 year old Enlai Mao of China. And one more, who is from Africa, that I would rather not discuss because it would ruin the plot.The beacons were possessed by the ooze. They became evil. Though they hid it from every person in their lives, people started to notice that they were grumpier and meaner than they usually were. But, they had the ability to transform into a monster form.
The Zombies used the only small rip they had to Earth, into the heart of the Amazon rain forest. Only The Prince and Princess(called Justie and Scotia) and a hundred other zombies came to the invasion of Earth.
The zombies had super strength, though most regular them could be killed easily by a very strong human. The royalty even had the ability to fly and shoot energy blasts out of there hands.
They flew to find any humans. The first ones they found was a small village of the tribe "Lasoota". They were unknown to the outside world.
They began blasting the huts and killing people of this village of only 500 people. They killed only about 100 people, but, there was something there they didn't expect.
5 orphan children. There was Silvin, Tomto, Zelter, Poli, and Dehlia. Silvin was the oldest, 9 years old. Tomto was his brother who was 7. Zelter and Poli were twin 8 year old brothers and sons of friends of Silvin and Tomto's parents. Dehlia was the only girl, and was Zelter and Poli's cousin. She was 7 years old.
There parents were great warriors. But they never got to know them. They all died in a fight when they were all infants. They were raised by a friendly nurse. They never knew how there parents died, or who they were fighting. They had another friend, though. He was an outcast to the rest of the tribe though, because most people thought he was a monster.
He lived in the forest, and said he was 10 years old. His skin was green, he had fangs, and was 8 feet tall. The orphans would go out to forest everyday to play with their friend. He didn't know what he was, or who his parents were. His friends gave him the name Nermost, and that was the only thing he knew what to call himself.
All the orphan had amazing super strength which they couldn't explain. They could even fly and shoot energy blasts like the zombies. Nermost was super strong too, but not nearly close to what the orphans were. In truth, the orphan's great-great-great-great-great-grandparents were from another planet. They were from a super strong race, and they were planet explorers. They landed on Earth, and since they looked human, easily were able to get into the Lasoota Tribe. They married humans, and had children. Though by the time the orphans parents were born, they had forgotten all about their alien herritage, they still had the incredible strength.
When the zombies started attacking, they had no idea what was going on. But even though they were so young, they fought these mysterious enemies, because they had killed the nurse that raised them. They turned all the Zombie's troops into sand(which is all they can do because they are already dead), and hurt the prince and princess.
Justie and Scotia went back to the Dark Zone, and got more troops. They didn't tell the King and Queen though, because they knew they would destroy them if they knew they failed.
They went back and fought and lost again. They kept fighting for over 20 years, to present day. The orphans managed to destroy 10,000 zombies, while the zombies only killed 100 more people in the village.
Time travels differently in different dimensions, and the 20 years wasn't even a day in the Dark Zone. By this time, the orphan had already told the zombies everything about themselves. Yet they knew almost nothing about them, except that they were called zombies, and that Justie and Scotia were Prince and Princess of the zombies.
Then one day, the Prince and Princesss fired a huge attack at the orphans. They couldn't find there bodies any where, and thought they had been disenigrated. But really all that had happened is that their bodies has been blown about a mile away. They returned, and saw a huge amount of zombies flying in the sky. Silven and Nermost(the strongest of the group) followed them.
The Zombies were heading to Freakyland to continue their attack, and bring the demons into Earth.