The Freaky Fighters

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It's an idea for a comic book or a tv show that I've been working with for quite a while now. This is a prologue describing the back plot to this story, that will make it a lot easier to understand. It's pretty long, though all other parts of the story won't be as long. It's kind of like Buffy, so I think you'll enjoy it.

Anyway, it takes place in a fictional European country called Freakyland. It is small, but it has a very high standard of living. But, it has centuries of legends of monsters and demons. Which is rightly so, seeing how it lies atop a portal to hell( I know, I know, very Buffy like...)

In my story, there are 4 dimensions. Usually the only way you could get to another one is by magic, but there are rips in the fabric of the universe, and there just so happen that one laid right in the capitol city of Freakyland, Frake City. In a room in the palace of the king.

The 4 dimensions are Heaven, The Living Plain, Hell, and "The Dark Zone". The Living Plain is where we live. It is the only plain where our souls and bodies are together. When you die, the body stays here, but your soul goes on. If you were a good person, the Gods will allow to enter heaven. In heaven you have no physical appearance, and only are a soul. But not all bad people go to hell. Satan only allows demons and people who worship him to go to hell. The gods try to make hell a tortuing place to people, making them into ghosts, but the demons live it up happily. For bad people who aren't quite evil, they go to the last dimension, which has been nicknamed "The Dark Zone". It is a world in eternal darkness. The people here become Zombies. Though their bodies remain on Earth, they are still connected to their bodies. They have eternal life, and all they have to do is sit and feel there bodies decaying forever. And they hate it.

That's why they want to go to the world of the living. The Zombies are ruled by an old corrupt king and queen of an ancient land, that were killed when their citizen revolted. Over the centuries, they have adopted many zombies to rule as princes and princesses, but most recently, they have added a brother and sister who were killed in a gang fight.

The demons of hell used their powers to help the ghosts communicate with the zombies. The all wanted to get out of these dimensions the Gods had imprisoned them in. The hellians knew they could escape if they wanted through the portal in Freakyland, but there was something stopping them.

Every generation, the Gods placed 7 beacons on the world, inside the humblest people on the Earth. These people carried inside the power that would restrain all evil away. The demons knew what to do. The created a black ooze that, if it touched anyone, would take over their body, make them evil, and turn them into a monster. They would have the ability to transform in and out of their monster form, and continue on in their lives so nobody would know. If it took over the beacon holders, it would completely destroy its power.

The 7 holders were all over the world. There was 7 year old Daniela Wutar, of Freakyland. 10 year old Maria Capet of Paris, France. 12 year old Silvia Columbo of New York. 15 year old Francisco Gomez of Brazil. 20 year old Carl Barton of Australia. 30 year old Enlai Mao of China. And one more, who is from Africa, that I would rather not discuss because it would ruin the plot.The beacons were possessed by the ooze. They became evil. Though they hid it from every person in their lives, people started to notice that they were grumpier and meaner than they usually were. But, they had the ability to transform into a monster form.

The Zombies used the only small rip they had to Earth, into the heart of the Amazon rain forest. Only The Prince and Princess(called Justie and Scotia) and a hundred other zombies came to the invasion of Earth.

The zombies had super strength, though most regular them could be killed easily by a very strong human. The royalty even had the ability to fly and shoot energy blasts out of there hands.

They flew to find any humans. The first ones they found was a small village of the tribe "Lasoota". They were unknown to the outside world.

They began blasting the huts and killing people of this village of only 500 people. They killed only about 100 people, but, there was something there they didn't expect.

5 orphan children. There was Silvin, Tomto, Zelter, Poli, and Dehlia. Silvin was the oldest, 9 years old. Tomto was his brother who was 7. Zelter and Poli were twin 8 year old brothers and sons of friends of Silvin and Tomto's parents. Dehlia was the only girl, and was Zelter and Poli's cousin. She was 7 years old.

There parents were great warriors. But they never got to know them. They all died in a fight when they were all infants. They were raised by a friendly nurse. They never knew how there parents died, or who they were fighting. They had another friend, though. He was an outcast to the rest of the tribe though, because most people thought he was a monster.

He lived in the forest, and said he was 10 years old. His skin was green, he had fangs, and was 8 feet tall. The orphans would go out to forest everyday to play with their friend. He didn't know what he was, or who his parents were. His friends gave him the name Nermost, and that was the only thing he knew what to call himself.

All the orphan had amazing super strength which they couldn't explain. They could even fly and shoot energy blasts like the zombies. Nermost was super strong too, but not nearly close to what the orphans were. In truth, the orphan's great-great-great-great-great-grandparents were from another planet. They were from a super strong race, and they were planet explorers. They landed on Earth, and since they looked human, easily were able to get into the Lasoota Tribe. They married humans, and had children. Though by the time the orphans parents were born, they had forgotten all about their alien herritage, they still had the incredible strength.

When the zombies started attacking, they had no idea what was going on. But even though they were so young, they fought these mysterious enemies, because they had killed the nurse that raised them. They turned all the Zombie's troops into sand(which is all they can do because they are already dead), and hurt the prince and princess.

Justie and Scotia went back to the Dark Zone, and got more troops. They didn't tell the King and Queen though, because they knew they would destroy them if they knew they failed.

They went back and fought and lost again. They kept fighting for over 15 years, to present day. The orphans managed to destroy 10,000 zombies, while the zombies only killed 100 more people in the village.

Time travels differently in different dimensions, and the 20 years wasn't even a day in the Dark Zone. By this time, the orphan had already told the zombies everything about themselves. Yet they knew almost nothing about them, except that they were called zombies, and that Justie and Scotia were Prince and Princess of the zombies.

Then one day, the Prince and Princesss fired a huge attack at the orphans. They couldn't find there bodies any where, and thought they had been disenigrated. But really all that had happened is that their bodies has been blown about a mile away. They returned, and saw a huge amount of zombies flying in the sky. Silven and Nermost(the strongest of the group) followed them.

The Zombies were heading to Freakyland to continue their attack, and bring the demons into Earth.
 
Chapter 1

It was a quiet night it the usually busy metropolitian area. It was Frake City, the capital of Freakyland.

Freakyland is a medium size European country. It had a great economy, and outstanding standard of living. Many immagrants moved here. While their language is English, their country's name is a word from their ancient language, which means Heroic.

The people of here had faced more than one war in their history. The constant battles they faced to become a free nation, and it seems finally they had won. Though with their centuries of fighting, many people were trained warriors. Learning different stlyes of defense, particularly the county's own unique martial arts called Gontola, which means skilled warrior.

But, going back to the empty street. Yes, it was eight at night, and while this was usually rush hour, there was no traffic. There were no people on the streets. No people at work. Restaurants were closed, hardly a noise could be heard. That was because tonight was the tag-team championship match of the Freakylandic Wrestling League.

Being a country with such an interest of fighting, wrestling is of course it's most popular sport. It's different from olympic style wrestling, and pro wrestling. It was real, of course, but the moves consisted more of punches than grip locks. The wrestlers also liked to act like pro wrestlers that they'd seen from American television, wearing silly costumes and giving themselves nick names. But this was just fun on the wrestlers parts.

Anyone who was anyone was at that match, which took place in an arena that sat 50 000. The rest were at home watching it on TV. It was going to be a spectactular match to remember.

It was The Flamers vs The Dark Brothers. The Flamers were not homosexual in anyway, it was a joke name for their team. Christian "Red Hottie" Becknell, and his partner(only for wrestling of course) Jason "Charcoal" Pierce.

They had been best friends since they were children, training all their lives. They had worked hard to get to where they are today. They were both in their early thirties. Jason was was one year older. He got his nickname from his long dark shoulder length hair. He also had dark eyes that made him look very mean. He was. He had a terrible temper and often got into fights with people over small things.

Christian had bright red he wore with big bangs. He and was cool, calm, and collective. He didn't get angry the way Jason did. He thought of life like a big joke, and he only wanted to have fun. He liked wearing tight shirts that showed off all his muscles. Both of them were very attractive, and being the huge celebreties they were, got many beautiful women.

It was half an hour until the big match began. The Flamers were in their dressing room, surrounded by reporters.

"Hey, I few questions Mr Becknell?" one of the paparazzi shouted at him.

"Go ahead, not like I can stop you," Jason said.

"So, are you nervous?"

"Hell no."

"You're that confident that you're going to beat The Dark Brothers?"

"Yeah, for sure. I mean, why should I be afraid of some pansie no comers, who go around wearing leather masks! They either have very ugly faces, or some weird fetish."

The people in the room started laughing, escpecially Christian.

"Well, they have yet to lose a fight. This is only their first season in the league and they have already made it to the championships."

"So did we, remember. I ain't scared at all. Every guy they fighted was a *****, and we aren't. We already go five belts hanging at our walls at home, and we're gonna take a sixth home tonight."

"Oh yeah!" screamed Christian. He had been drinking, only making him more wild than usual.

"What do you have to say about rumors saying you two are gay?"

"Shut the hell up!" screamed Jason. "What is it with all this **** the media keeps doing! You say ugly actors from Friends have tons of ladies, but you say guys like us are *****s! Next thing you know, y'all be sayin' Michael Jackson is straight!"

"Why da ya always hafta go for da cheep Micheal Jackson shot," said Christian.

"Well, it's an assumption easy to make, considering you are two men who spend all their time together and live together even though you are very wealthy."

"I'll have you know I've had more women than you'll ever see! Shut up!" Jason was very angry. The reporter started giggling. Jason got up from his seat and grabbed the reporter in a headlock. Christian just sat in his chair and grinned.

The people around them were shocked, and the reporter had a look of pure terror on his face.

"Aren't you going to do anything!" screamed a photographer to Christian.

"Nah, Jay always let's 'em go anyway."

Jason was squeezing the mans neck and he was struggling to breathe.

"How da ya like that, huh?"

"Puh-please, let me...go..."

Two of Christian's body guards and started pulling him away from the reporter.

"Pfft. Ok, ok, I'm going. Jeeze, I wasn't going to hurt him."

At that moment their manager came in.

"Better get ready, the match starts in five minutes."

Jason let go of the reporter and let him fall to the ground.

"See ya later."

The two of them walked out to the arena.

"One of these days Jay, you're gonna be arrested for assualt."

"I hope so..."
 
I've read the first part now, I'll do the other part, some other day ... hope you don't mind?

BTW: It's pretty cool, but like a lot of comics a little far fetched from time to time!
 
Chapter 2

The two wrestlers walked out of their changing rooms, down the hallway to the main arena. They were anticipating winning the match, and didn't have a single ounce of fear that they might lose.

With their body guards behind them, there was only one other person there. A young woman was standing by the door, holding a pad and paper.

"Oh My God! i can't believe it! It's you! It's really you!"

Christian looked her up, liking what he saw. He grinned and approached her.

"Hey there," he said a smooth voice. The girl started giggling.

"Could...oh man, could you sign your autograph?"

"Sure, who should I make it out to?"

"Ka...Kathy..."

He picked up her pen and wrote down his name like he did so many times before. He slipped her back the paper, along with a VIP backstage pass he got out of his pocket.

"Here you go. Show this to the guard after the match, we can 'celebrate' my victory in my changing room."

The girl ran off practicly screaming in joy.

"She sure is a hottie," said Christian. "I just hope she's over 18."

"And I hope she's brought a friend along. Those kind of Bimbos always travel in packs."
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Meanwhile, on seashore of Frake City Beach, the ocean was filled with thousands of zombies. Bodies of people that were decayed and rotten. Full of scabs and scars, givng off a terrible smell. There skin a strange shade of brownish green. They wore tathered clothing, the ones that wore clothing anyway. The army washed up on the shore, while their Prince and Princess floated above them.

"Oh, yes..." moaned Soctia. The evil Princess had long black hair, which was stringy and dry due to the fact she was a corpse. She wore a tank top, which didn't have a rip in them, and a very short skirt and long black leather boots. She had large hoop earings, necklaces, braclets, and a ring on every finger. "We shouldn't of spent so mcuh time with those humans in the jungle. Yes, now we are here, to free are fellow demons."

"Yes, that little grudge match of our set us back, luckily it wasn't even hours in our world," said Justie with pride. His hair was a dark shade of blue, and his skin was so pale it was like all the color was sucked out of it. He had an earing on his right ear, and a t-shirt showing off his tatoos, and had large baggie jeans with a chain hanging on the side. "Now that the beacons of light have been disarmed, all that is left is killing all life in the area surronding the portal, and the demons can join us here."

"And once they do, they will release all the zombies from The Dark Zone, and we will kill the rest of this world. And there's nothing the Gods can do to stop us!"

"They might of thought us sinners in life, but now we will sin for the rest of eternity!"
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And not too far away from the army of the living dead, were the only two in the world who could stop them. Silvin flying through the sky, carrying his best friend Nermost, who did not have his power to fly.

Silvin had dark black hair which was cut in almost the shape of a Mushroom Cut. He had very pale skin, though not so much as Justie. He wore a shirt made of very crude materials that was to large for him and showed of much of his chest, and wore a pair of jagged pants. His companion was 8 feet tall and had green skin. Other than that he looked like a regular human, but all his features were huge. He had very thin layer of blond hair growing on his hair, and was only wearing a mixture of straw and mud to cover his waist.

"We've been following the 'zombies' as they call themselves for weeks and weeks over the water," said Nermost in their native language, which I'm conviently translating. "Who knew it could of been so long. We must be the first people ever to cross it, what do you suppose will be at the end?"

"I don't know. My guess it's the wherever these monsters are from. They said they want to kill the entire world, maybe it will be a great village like that one at the edge of the jungle. The one where people dress in marvelous clothing and have gigantic gray trees and the ground is black and they travel inside of large colorful animals."

"LOOK! Land! We have made it to the end of the world!"
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Meanwhile miles away in the land just outside of Frake City, stood a huge palace. It surrounding it were acres and acres of land. Swimming pools, tennis courts, and golf courses. The palace had over 100 rooms, it was the home of King Brang Trekington the second.

Inside his largest lving room, Brang sat down on his leather couch, feet stretched out a glass coffee table, wearing only a tight blue muscle shirt and an old pair of jeans. His big screen tv was tuned in waiting to see the big match. At that moment his best friend Goba Hawk walked into the room in the room with a bowl of popcorn.

Goba, besides being the King's best friend, was also his body guard. Not that he needed one, Brang was actually much stronger than Goba, as it is costumary for a king to be trained in Gontola. The Hawks had been the personal bodygaurds to the royal family for centuries, so it had just become tradition. Brang met Goba when he was 10 years old, at the same time that he became King due to his parents dying in a plane crash. They became instant friends, often sparring together, and once he turned 18, Goba became His Majesty's bodyguard. Goba isn't the strongest guy around, and didn't exactly have a fine toned body, but his expertise was sword fighting. He was trained in the art at a young age, and is one of the greatest in the world. Brang is also a skilled fighter, and he won national Gontola competitions 5 years in a row.

Goba was very tall, almost 6'4, but he wasn't very attractive. He had brown curly hair and a very large nose. But Brang was very handsome. He had deep blue eyes and dark brown hair he usually wore geled up in spikes. Also being the King, he was a very eligible bachelor, but he didn't date much.

"The fight come on yet?" asked Goba laying down the popcorn and sitting next to Brang.

"Nope, just this damn pre-game show," sighed Brang taking a handfull of popcorn.

"Where are the others?"

"Oh, the staff is watching downstairs in the employees lounge."

"Oh. I thought you'd let them watch up here."

"Well, it's just easier this way. Oh, I don't know. You know that I'm the last person to try to be mean to the help. Hell, they're almost the only people I see on a regular basis."

At that moment, a woman stood at the doorway carrying a tray of snacks.

"Esperanza," said Brang softly.

"Yes, hello your Majesty. I thought you might enjoy something to eat during the match," she said with her Spanish accent.

"Yes, thank you..." said Brang staring at her smiling. "You can leave them here."

"Yes, sir," she said. She left the tray on the table, gazing into Brang's eyes for only a second before pulling herself away. She was one of the many chefs of the palace. She was 24, had long brown hair that she was wearing in a bun. She turned around and left the room.

"So what's going on between you two?" asked Goba.

"I don't know what you mean."

"C'mon Brangy, everyone in this house is talking about it."

"We've, um, we've been on a few dates. I mean, we didn'' go out or anything, Uh, yeah, it's sorta been going on few months."

"And?"

"She, it's like she doesn't think she deserves to be with a king. She feels like she's beneath me. She doesn't want anyone to know. But I want everyone to know! I want to shout out to the world that I love Esperanza Lorenzo!"

"You love her?"

"I, I, I've known her since she was 15, when she first came here from Spain with her family. She could hardly any English. She was so cute. And I've just grown to learn all about her, and I guess you could say I do love her."

There was a long silnce in the room. Finally after a few minutes...

"Hey, the match is starting!" screamed Goba.

"Yes! This is gonna be great!"

And so a love sick King and his bodygaurd waited to see a wrestling match, while two wrestlers waited to start a match that would change their lives, while an army of zombies went out to kill every human in the region so that their life force wouldn't close off the portal, while an orphaned humanoid space alien from a tribe in the heart of South America, and his best friend a green monster who had no idea what he was set out to stop them.
 
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