Within it Devours

zombie.apparatus

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well since i try and participate as much as i can on the boards i thought i might try a fan fic. it will be a buffy related fan fic set in season 1, 2 and 3.

Buffy is 16 years old and Dawn will be 14, both attending high school. So basically the whole Dawn is the key isnt a part of the story line.

thats all i have thought about.. there wont be a plot until i have finished chapter one. just letting you know the two main characters ages.. oh and i am also thinking about bringing Faith into the story too

until the first chapter! 😀
xx
 
*charmed slayer* agrees: hopefully.. never done a fanfic before lol! thanks xx


Nah, it'll be fine. :: tu ::

Citing author Anne Lamont's book, "Bird By Bird", she basically says that if you get over worrying about writing absolute crap and, instead, write the first thing that comes to mind, something brilliant might come out of it. Worry blocks the mind from doing some of the stranger stuff it sometimes has to do to be brilliant.

Just let yourself go, and you'll be brilliant.

Good luck.
 
Z
zombie.apparatus
your such a darl xx
S
Spirit_Of_Fred
he he, not so true for me...it usually IS crap...
Chapter 1

Dawn looked down at the crossbow that Buffy held in her hands.

Dawn: So Buffy, when will I be allowed to use the crossbow?

Buffy: Lets see thinks for a second never.

Dawn: What! No fair, you got to use it at my age, and.. and I need it to protect myself. You have your super strength and stuff.

Buffy: Fine, whiner.

Buffy hands Dawn the crossbow

Dawn: Am not. Besides I have a had a little practice with this thing before. Dawn starts aiming the crossbow at the trees surrounding them

Buffy: oh really so how about you aim for that… two vamps attack from behind. One of them grabs Dawn by the shoulders. Dawn screams.

Dawn: Buffy! Help

Buffy: ah can you see I’m a little busy, use your crossbow. Struggles. Buffy does a round house kick and stakes the vamp through the heart.

Dawn: what are you kidding! I don’t know how to use this thing.

Buffy rolled her eyes. Buffy pulled the vampire off Dawn who was struggling to keep the vamp from biting her neck. Buffy stakes the vampire from behind. Buffy brushes the remains of the vampire off her hands.
Dawn held her hand over the bite where the vampire had left two visible holes.Buffy looked at the mark the vampire had left on Dawn's neck.

Buffy: Agh, mums gonna kill me. From now on, no more crossbow, you and the bow… don’t mix.

Dawn: Ugh. Dawn crosses arms

Buffy: Don’t ugh me.

Dawn pouts

Dawn: I suck at this.
 
Chapter 2

Buffy and Dawn opened the door and saw the scoobies sitting at the dining room table.

Buffy: Hey, I wasn't expecting you guys here. Well not this late anyways, not unless there's an apocalypse or something. Buffy said sarcastically. Silence filled the room. Omg there is an apocalypse! Buffy looked at Giles. Another one?

Giles pulled a handkerchief from his pocket and began to wipe his glasses.

Buffy: uh oh

Giles: uh oh what?

Buffy: that's a something's up face, and you're wiping your glasses. Buffy sat down at the table. You're about to give us a huge lecture or are about to fill us in on what's happening when something's wrong, or sometimes might be wrong.

Giles glared at Buffy in the most serious face he could pull.

Giles: Well no just the one. And you already know about the Mayor and Faith. Why are you home early?

Buffy: oh well Dawn was with me tonight and well its hard patrolling when someone's constantly talking and annoying you. Buffy glared at Dawn.

Dawn: hey, standing right here.

Buffy shrugs. Sorry Dawn it's the truth, you're quite a distraction.

Dawn: what are little sisters for right? Dawn giggled and picked up a cookie from the centre of the table and ate half the cookie within her first bite.

Buffy laughs sarcastically. ha no Dawn. So Giles, what's the deal with this apocalypse? Is it bad, or just another a day in the life of Buffy Summers?

Giles: Well that's what we are researching now. Willow has found out some useful information.

Buffy interrupts.

Buffy: Oh cool, Wil what you got?

Willow: well. Uh it's called an ascension, I haven't really found too much that we don't already know.

Xander: oh it's happening during an eclipse. Xander clicked his fingers as he read through a textbook and pointed to where he had found his information. A night within a day. Hmm Buff you get that?

Giles stood up. Giles: That's odd. The only eclipse is"¦ good lord.

Buffy curious to know.
what Giles, what's happening with this eclipse? Is the world going to end?

Giles: no but I think your graduation is "¦ its going to be ... a complete mess.

Buffy: the eclipse is the day of our graduation. Great. Just great. How the heck am I going to stop the ascension AND graduate? No fair.

Willow: I don't think you will have to worry about that being a problem Buffy.

Dawn: huh with a mouthful of cookie.

Willow: well The Mayor is going to be a guest speaker at your graduation. It says here. Willow pushes the newspaper over to Buffy.

Buffy: oh great. Now I have to stop the ascension, graduate, listen to him ramble and save everyone in our class. There's no way im saving Snyder.

Dawn laughed.Giles looked at Dawn and then at Buffy.

Giles: that is not funny. You're both as bad as each other.

Xander: it was a little funny, I hate that guy.

Giles: don't we all


**​

After the scoobies left Buffy and Dawn both went into their bedrooms and the house was left dark with only the moonlight leaving shadows on the walls of Buffy's bedroom.

Buffy: Shouldn't you knock.

Angel: sorry, I thought you were asleep

Buffy: come in Angel. Buffy smiled and sat up in her bed. So is this a social call or does it have to do with something that goes bump in the night.

Angel: well vampires are not the only things that go bump in the night. Angel smiled mischievously.

Buffy smiled. very funny. What's up?


Angel: does something have to be wrong for me to see you?

Buffy: no of course not.

Angel: just came here to see the look on my girlfriends face when I give her this.

Angel held up a silver chain with a shiny cross that was glowing as the moonlight from outside shown through and touched the edge of the cross.

Buffy: wow its beautiful. I bet she will love it!

Angel looked at Buffy.

Angel: I hope so too.

Angel and Buffy looked deeply into each other's eyes. Trying to read what each other was thinking. Angel lifted Buffy's golden blonde hair as he put the necklace around her neck. They both laid into bed and Angel held Buffy in his arms.

Buffy: I do"¦. Buffy rolled over and looked at Angel"¦ love it I mean.

Angel kissed Buffy on the forehead and fell asleep in each other's arms.
 
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DrusillaRox
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww bangel, yay!!!!!!!!!! you rock!
Chapter 3

Dawn walked down the hallway of the Summers house and into her bathroom. As she entered the bathroom she noticed someone was in the shower. A body of a young teenage guy"¦

(Omg) Dawn thought, (is that? Omg I think it is"¦ its Xander.) Dawn let out a sigh under her breath but obviously not quiet enough.

Xander: Hey who's there, show yourself!

Xander put his hand around the side of the shower curtain and pointed his hand, which he had positioned into a gun and pointed it at Dawn. Dawn rushed towards the door in a hurry. Xander pulled back the curtain to see who was in the bathroom.

Xander: Dawn?

Dawn: argh busted. Sorry I. Uh"¦

Xander just gave Dawn another look, a look that says "huh".

Dawn: Im sorry, but geesh don't you ever lock the door, I mean aren't you glad it was me and not my mum who walked in here.

Xander: what exactly are you implying there Dawnie. Said Xander mischievously.

Dawn: oh nothing, well im going to leave now, and leave you to"¦ uh.. um shower.

Xander: yeah thanks, and can you lock the door on the way out.

Dawn nodded and left the bathroom after locking it for Xander.

~​


Dawn walked downstairs after being too embarrassed to come out of her bedroom after basically seeing her crush Xander pretty much naked. Dawn sat down at the table and joined Buffy, Joyce and the scoobies for breakfast.

Buffy: so you finally come downstairs to eat, I had the last bagel, didn't think you were coming down.

Dawn: Oh that's okay, im not that hungry.

Xander: Dawnie you should eat something"¦

Dawn: Thanks for your concern, but I'll get a bite later.

Dawn kept eyeing of Xander, way more than usual and kept blushing every time Xander would look in her direction and every time she thought he was looking at her. Buffy noticed Dawn looking at Xander and blushing.

Buffy: Dawn, come with me to the kitchen to help me with the juice?

Dawn: but"¦

Dawn saw the look Buffy was giving her. She thought (great, just what I need.)

Dawn: fine

Dawn and Buffy excused themselves from the table as Willow and Xander were playing battle ship with the salt and pepper and the rest of the stuff sitting at the table and Joyce and Giles were talking about their jobs. Buffy leant against the kitchen bench and Dawn opened the door to the fridge and began looking for the juice.

Dawn: so what juice, we have orange and"¦ well there is only orange. Oh wait no there's some apple here. I so bags it.

Buffy: Dawn? Buffy gave Dawn that look again.

Dawn: okay you have to stop doing that. What did I do?

Buffy: you know exactly what.

Dawn: if this is about your blue sweater.

Buffy: you took my clothes without asking. Argh"¦ you're so annoying.

Dawn: what it is like one sweater, what are you even talking about?

Buffy: you"¦. And Xander.

Dawn began to blush.


Dawn: what about"¦me and "¦ Xander.

Buffy: oh don't play games, I saw you two eyeing each other off. You have made it quite obvious.

Dawn yeah well there is nothing going on between Xander and me"¦ not yet.

Buffy: so you like him then?

Dawn: yeah why should it matter, you have Angel"¦ I heard him come in last night so don't you be pounding on my back.

Buffy: im not, its just its Xander, and he's like my best friend"¦ I just"¦ it would be weird"¦ your like 14 and Xander is 16.

Dawn: you can't talk"¦ look how old Angel is.

Buffy: shh, keep it down. Mum doesn't know about me and Angel dating.

Dawn: well she wasn't too bad when you told her about you being the slayer.

Buffy: yeah well that was different, this is boyfriend sorta stuff"¦and this is "¦ different.

Dawn: you said different already. Well you back off from what Xander and me might have and ill back off from your relationship with Angel.

Buffy: one condition, I get the apple.

Dawn gave Buffy a dirty look and handed her the juice.

Dawn: I hate being the youngest, and the weakest I might add.

Buffy: you'll get over it.
 
Uh, CS, you've stopped writing. Why?? 😛

Don't be so cruel to your fans. (says the Mod who never finishes his stories. 😛)
 
Z
zombie.apparatus
i have actually nearly finished my new chapter.. ill post it after ive finished it.. just for you :P
soon?? coz that would be great! and I love your fic! is buffy graduating at 16????

SoF - if you're reading, hows YOUR fic going, its really good also
 
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