Werewolf@Night wrote on 01-25-2004 04:04 PM:
Okay, I have recently wrote a couple of alternetive Season 5 Angel episodes. And here is the first five pages or so of the first ep
Angel
Season 5
Episode 01
"Small World"
Teaser
Angel's main office, Angel is leaning against his desk.
The camera cuts to a small, golden plaque that says: "Angel Smith - Wolfarm & Hart CEO"
The camera cuts to a large view of the office. Wesely walks in.
ANGEL
Hello, Wesley
WESLEY
(Nervous) Uh, hello Angel.
ANGEL
Nervous?
WESLEY
First day at the job, you know little butterflies
Fred and Gunn walk in. The camera cuts to Fred
FRED
Hey, just Gunn and I just coming early
The camera cuts back to Angel, viewing his watch
ANGEL
The meeting started three minutes ago
Pan to Fred and Gunn making faces for being late. As Lorne walks threw the doors
LORNE
Welcome loony tunes.
Zoom out to everyone standing in the office
ANGEL
I told you to never say that again Lorne
LORNE
(Walks and sits down at the now visible meeting table) Well you know me; I get every chance I get.
GUNN
So (Gunn sits down at the table) we all (Angel and Fred sit down. Angel is on the top of the table) Here?
WESLEY
Well, I have a little special guest
ANGEL
Who?
The camera pans slowly, as the camera finally reaches the front door of the office. The doors open but no one appears to be there.
WESLEY (voiceover)
No one special
The camera takes a better look at the door, as it changes its angle. Faith is there standing
Cut to opening credits. Theme song plays.
"ANGEL" staring:
David Boreanaz
Alexis Denisof
J. August Richards
Amy Acker
Andy Hallett
and
Eliza Dushku as 'Faith'
Guest Starring:
Stephanie Romanov as 'Lilah Morgan'
D.B. Woodside as 'Robin Wood'
Mercedes McNab as 'Harmony Kendall'
ACT 1
The Hyperion, night. On the bottom of the screen it says: 'Two months earlier: July 2003' everyone is sitting together at the table, having dinner.
LORNE
A toast?
GUNN
Of course (raises his glass as everyone follows)
Camera cuts to Gunn and Fred holding hands underneath the table.
Camera cuts out to Angel
ANGEL
A toast, to new life!
LORNE (voiceover
And better clothes!
Cut to the overview of the table
WESLEY
A whole new world of ideas, and wonder
LORNE
Yea, yea but what about the clothes?
GUNN
Better weaponry, as well
FRED
Weapons (rests her head on Gunn's shoulder)
ANGEL
Cheers.... (They all knock their glasses together and start to drink in union)...to Wolfarm & Hart
Cut to a dark Hyperion room, dark shadows are kissing.
FRED
Oh, Gunn....you've never done that before
The camera pans to across the room wall as Angel and Gunn are walking down the hallway
ANGEL
I still have a bad feeling about Wolfram & Hart
GUNN
You're not the only one; I mean we spent the past years fighting against them. And they think they can just waltz in and...
Lorne (voiceover)
Let us take over a multi-million company
The camera zooms out a little to see Lorne joining in on the conversation
LORNE
Money buys you happiness, besides we'll finally have control of everything that happens in this great city of lies and deceits
GUNN
He's right; we'll be on top of all the evil that happens
ANGEL
And the good
GUNN
And the good, yes. I think it's a good idea
ANGEL
I still have doubts
LORNE
Didn't Ally McBeal give us a 7-day trial?
GUNN
Her name is Lilah, and she only gave us 3 days to see how it is before we give our signature
ANGEL
Or we can reject them
GUNN
That's always an option, but think about it Angel!
LORNE
We'll be the icing of the polluted, industrial cake of LA
Cut to Angel and Gunn talking to Lilah. You can't hear what they are saying. Soft music is playing in the background. They shake hands as the camera cuts to Wolfarm & Hart, streets of LA, strip club, and then at the Hyperion. Lilah, Angel, and Gunn are in the lobby.
LILAH
So it's a deal, big man?
ANGEL
Not official, we'd like to see a tour
LILAH
I already gave you one
ANGEL
But we aren't separated this time
Pan closely to Lorne busting through the door.
GUNN (voiceover)
I agree, I don't know what you were trying to do
The camera follows Lorne as he runs upstairs
LILAH (voiceover)
Okay, you don't have to jump on me
The camera pans sideways as Lorne walks down the hallway
LILAH (voiceover)
Get the rest of your recruits
ANGEL (voiceover)
Lorne was finding Wes and Fred after he did an errand. He just came in
Lorne opens the door to a room looks around
LORNE
Fred? Wesley?
Lorne shrugs and slams the door behind him, going to another door. The camera stays in the room
LORNE (voiceover)
Any brits in the room?
The camera slowly pans across to the bed; there is a bump in it. As Wesley and Fred appear from it, holding the blankets closely to their chest.
WESLEY
He didn't catch us
FRED
G-good (Wesley looks a little hurt) It's not that it's a bad thing, but with all the angst with Wolfram and Hart. And Gunn
WESLEY
(Rolls his eyes) Gunn. Are you still?
FRED
Yea
WESLEY
And we?
FRED
...Yea
WESLEY
We won't?
FRED
Agreed
WESLEY
Was it that bad?
FRED
It was perfect (Thinks for a moment and starts kissing Wesley)
