You Gotta Have Faith,A Fic About The Dark Slayer

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Hi,Ive just started writing this fic,hope you enjoy!

You Gotta Have Faith
Previously- Faith has killed,has slayed and fled to L..a. Two and a half years along,she's serving time with her guilt and her vicious alter ego who she's trying to forget.
Part One
Running ,Slaying,Killing,Stabing,Out for the hunt,running,slaying,fighting,killing,run,kill,.................."NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"Faith awoke with a start,it was two and a half years since she awoke from her coma and fled to L.A.and finally turned herself in,she could hardly live with all the guilt of betraying her friends.She was a Slayer,she HAD been a killer-big difference,she was strong and powerfull,she could bust outta the big house if she wanted,but she wanted to pay the price,she truly wanted to make amends.She had feelings,she couldn't beleive she ws feeling,she was a tough,independent,dark Slayer and she had her flaws,big time.
She often had nightmares about her time in Sunnydale,she was no longer the vengefull,bitter bitch,she was just a girl.She had visitors on times,Watchers to make sure she was safe,stable,secure,they also wanted to keep an eye on her,but it was mostly Angel who visited her.She had developed a close friendship with the brooding vampire,he treated her with respect,she enjoyed his visits.He was her only friend at the moment.Deep thoughts in her ming she staggered out of her cold,hard bed.Her skin was dirty,tight and grim,she wanted to be clean,fresh and good.She jumped,a big,tall,muscular woman(who looked like a WWF wrestler)was slammed against the wall,to be put into a cell.Faith looked at the woman who shot her a disturbing glare.She had two tattoos on her arm,a HUGE bat,and a heart with a knife piercing it,Faith was not only alarmed by this,but when Faith saw her eyed turn so they were white then turn a blood red colour in a flsh to glare at her,she became very uneasey,and for a Slayer ..scared.........

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Hey,ive just done the second part-here ya go
Part 2
"Wake up!YO!You!"..."What?"Faith peeled open her eyes,her back in agony "You get off the floor"yelled the guard"Huh?oh"She tried to stand up,but she had to sit again,everything was a blur,her head was pounding."Ouch,what the hell happened?" Faith turned as she heard deep cackling,the WWF lookalike was staring at her "Oh,Great,creepy monster wretler,arrrh" Faith thougth allowed.Faith put her hair behind her ears and rubbed her eyes "Dammit"She hated when new people-especially creepy ones-arrived,but if they were a demon or something she could pummel for the good of mankind she didnt mind so much.She finally stood up,but fell straight back down,her leg had gone stiff,she couldnt feel it,but she knew her ankle was twisted "Darn,perfect for fighting,stupid..crappy....."Faith said to herself,meanwhile wrestler woman looked at Faith as if she knew exactly what she was thinking.She shot a cold,vicious grin at the slayer."HEY"Faith yelled "What's up with you?"she took several seconds to answer"Wouldn't you like to know" Faith could still see those eyes it made her head hurt,She looked at her eyes "“FLASH-It was Sunnydale,1999,The night she met Buffy,next was the night she killed the deputy mayor,she could feel that anger again,she could feel the pain and the vengence rising-FLASH-The Mayor "They can't all turn out like my Faith" FLASH,she was back for a split second,she steeped back from the cell door"What the hell.....?"Bright lights,she saw fire,demons and the darkness inside of them,she saw vamps...The Mayor in his snake form..Graduation....She tried to look ahead but the light blinded her,she looked behind,she could see her cell walls and the bed,she slammed her hand into the wall"STOOOOOOOPPPPP!!"it was gone."Like what you saw?Like yourself,what you did?You proud?You should be?............killer......."The big WWF lookalike woman laughed loudly,endlessley........

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Here ya go peeps-Part 3
"Will you stop it already?I get it you're bad,bad,bad,and I don't really care" yelled Faith "Oh,you will,you will" frustrated Faith replied-"Yup,Whatever,but can you please stop with the laughing?" "Ermm.No". WWF woman had been cackling and making remarks for hours,all Faith wanted to do was rest.She finally fell into a sleep,every night she had disturbing dreams,although none like this one.First was the dream that she shared with Buffy shortly after being put into a coma,she didn't want to dream what she was dreaming,but was forced to,the thoughts wouldn't budge.Dreams of her childhood were shoved into her mind,her bad childhhod,abusive mother,her life, all the emotions came flooding back,the violence,the hurt,the pain....then ....The Mayor....,he was the only person she had a real connection with before Angel,he was the only person who loved her..then..she was alone,in huge fields in the middle of no where,first surrounded by flowers,then water,then demons,then fire,then rain,then thunder..she ran and ran and ran,but ended up in the same place...then something that gave her an odd feeling walked towards her,she knew whatever it was would be terrifiyng..she..woke up.She never got close enough to see the thing,but she had felt that feeling before,the feeling she had when WWF woman looked into her eyes..was her dream some kind of prophecy?was all Hell about to break loose?She could remember the red skies,the colour made her head hurt,red represented something..what?.WWF woman glared at her with bloodshot eyes instead of bright red and white eyes "Did you like that world?" she asked "Hey whats your name?" "My name,Raze" "Weird" "Thats what they call me dow under" "Under where exactly?" "Under the opening of the mouth of hell"Her eyes flashed once more .Faith grasped her head with both hands "I hurt you again didn't i"she chuckled.."What are you ?" "Something you can't even imagine" "YOU!"the guard yelled at Faith "Yeah?" "You have a visitor€ Faith walked past Raze's cell and made her way down the hall.

I'll write part 4 soon!
 
Here's part 4 for all you lovely peeps!
Part 4

She walked down the long hall,looked at the floor,thinking of what she had heard...It was Tuesday,she usually had visits on Saturday or Sunday,she was led to a room where glass separated it,and a phone on either side,she sat down quietly as a guard walked into the room followed by Angel."Angel,didn't expect to see you today" "I thought I'd stop by,check to see how you're doing,but there's trouble." "Under statement of the year-I know" Angel looked at her with his dark,penetrating eyes he explained-"Cordelia had a vision,she saw something SO terrifiyng,she can't speak,or move." Faith instantly thought of her dream."Hey Angel,you ever heard of some pshyco chick called Raze?" She saw worry in his eyes "Uh-Oh,what's wrong?" "When I was sent to hell,Raze was the one who tortured me and countless others,there's always been fear,that she would move away from The Hellmouth,by orders of true evil,to turn on humans,torture,destuct...." "Angel,what?" "Raze knows things,she has powers you can't even imagine,she knows EVERYTHING,she haunts you,she can make you do tasks for her-anything,she was the first demon created by The First Evil" Faith cleared her throat "Oh,ok,ermmm,any info on her eyes?" "Her eyes?" "They go red,they flash,they hurt me-a LOT." "Oh,no,the colour symbolises her nature,her presence,her task." "Which would mean what exactly?" "Hell,chaos,death,destruction,but that colour in her eyes,can only truly hurt the Chosen" "No wonder I don't look good in red...What so it's like Slayer Kryptonite?Wicked evil,kinda cool,except that it hurts,i wanna hurt her-real bad,then I'll be five by five" "I came to warn you,Ill go back,I'll check things out,see what I can find,remember if you can't destroy Raze,all chaos will break loose,and her tru face is truly terrifiying,she doesn't need to destroy all good to show you that,when she's ready she'll reveal herself" Faith went speechless for a few seconds" What a bitch!" "I better go" "Yeah,thanks for the pep talk,come back with news..good..hopefully" "Ok,take care Faith" "I will,bye,oh and Angel" "yes?" "Thanks you- a lot" He nodded and left,she walked back to her cell,she had all the sarcasm,but deep down she was scared,Raze shouted "He tell you about me?I just love being famous...Hell,I loved hurting him" she laughed ,Faith was confused"How do you..?" "You'll never find out,you'll never defeat me little,unsignificant Slayer" "Why not?" "Because I have true evil on my team,I was created by The First nowt wants to open up,and rein the world,we will make it,our hell-our home" "Not if I can help it" Raze's eyes flashed once more they seemed to stay red forever,the pain was crucifiyng Faith........
TO BE CONTINUED
 
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