a poem

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...my soul is wrapped in harsh repose
midnight descends
in raven coloured clothes
but soft, behold
a sun light beam
cutting a swath of glimmering gleam
my heart expands
'tis grown a bulge in it
inspired by your beauty
effulgent


what ya think?
i wrote it all by myself:whistle:
 
It's funny how we were lead to believe that poem sucked during the flashbacks, then when Spike recited it in "Not Fade Away," it kicked ASS. You know . . . for a poem.
 
white avenger
white avenger
I always kinda liked it, even from the first. It was a part of the Spike/William character, just like the black leather duster. I can't say the same for that "hark, the lark" thing, though.
Angelic Slayer
Angelic Slayer
Very true... I think it just sounded that much "cooler"-- more serious from Spike's mouth rather than his human counterpart! :D
I think it's a nice poem...of course I don't know if I could tell good poetry from bad poetry in English, but maybe this poem was just like...hm, let's say about maybe 125 years ahead of it's time?
 
well i like it and it was my sign BB(before banner^^)This next one's called "The Wanton Folly of Me Mum". 😛
 
The poem is not as bad as we were led to believe about willys poetry. Compared to some of the pish I've read that was intently serious, willys poem is a work of art.
 
Schillaci said:
The poem is not as bad as we were led to believe about willys poetry. Compared to some of the pish I've read that was intently serious, willys poem is a work of art.
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Just because other poems are worse, doesn't mean it's not completely horrendous.
 
I know he did another poem, but did he ever say that poem. I know he says the title but does he actually say that poem? "The Wanted Folly Of Me Mum" one not the other one
 
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