I read it just now for the first time and liked it a lot. Thank you very much for sharing it.
You are actually right, that after Buffys first death and with Kendras calling the power of the slayer should have been Kendra`s power alone. It makes no sense, that we suddenly have two slayers. Where does the additional power come from ?
I liked the way, Buffy and Spike found each other and that Buffy still fought, even if she was without superpowers. After all, Xander always fought without superpowers. It is not impossible for a human to dust a vampire. I would have loved to see a bit more of them. Not neccessary repeating every episode from season 2 but maybe what they are going to do. They could become some freelance demon fighters for example. Or open up a detective bureau in L.A., now, that Angel has still business in Sunnydale to attend to and probably never looses his soul, because Kendra is not allowed to talk to boys, let alone have sex with them.
You are always comlaining about one-shots. Now I have to find out, you actually wrote one yourself and a very good one. Why don`t you like one-shots ?
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