CordelliasHeart
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A young man who blurred thel ine between coming on a bit strong, and attempting rape, towards a Middle school sweet heart, but she begged him off he tried to apolagize but she never wanted to speak to him again, and he doesnt suppose he can blame her.
He tried using his alchemical knowledge to Purge all human weakness from himself so he'll never be tempted to do such a thing again... if the end result is a drone without freewill then so be it.
For added horror, have the hyde murder a couple and burn their house down but when hes about to leave the jekyll changes back and hears their baby crying and leaps through flames to grab the baby then escape with it.
It had a REALLY REALLY Unconvincing Jekyll in that episode, seemed pretty clear he was a manipulative jerk even when not under the potions effects...
And a more likable charachter would have made it more poignant.
A young man who blurred thel ine between coming on a bit strong, and attempting rape, towards a Middle school sweet heart, but she begged him off he tried to apolagize but she never wanted to speak to him again, and he doesnt suppose he can blame her.
He tried using his alchemical knowledge to Purge all human weakness from himself so he'll never be tempted to do such a thing again... if the end result is a drone without freewill then so be it.
For added horror, have the hyde murder a couple and burn their house down but when hes about to leave the jekyll changes back and hears their baby crying and leaps through flames to grab the baby then escape with it.
It had a REALLY REALLY Unconvincing Jekyll in that episode, seemed pretty clear he was a manipulative jerk even when not under the potions effects...
And a more likable charachter would have made it more poignant.