Perrycareyrocks Stories, Sketches, and Ideas
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Aleris
Cosmic String!
I'm getting kind of confused as to why you keep writing like 2-3 lines in seperate posts all over the boards.
If you want our proper feedback, put the whole thing up in ONE spot.
We don't understand where you're coming from or where you're going in your story in just 2-3 lines.
If you want our proper feedback, put the whole thing up in ONE spot.
We don't understand where you're coming from or where you're going in your story in just 2-3 lines.
Aleris
Cosmic String!
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OK, perrycareyrocks there seems to be some confusion about what you want to do here, and apparently (according to other mods) you appear unable to reply to PMs.
Very well, let's try to help you here for now. Lately we've been following a little trail of bread crumbs of random story ideas scattered about the boards in various forums. As you've hopefully noticed these have been sent here to the fanfic forum.
This has become a problem as the front page was becoming covered with these, and nobody other than yourself appears to know exactly what they are. I've merged them all into one thread.
If you can think of a way you'd prefer to organize these in a manner which can be understood better, contact me via PM, and I'll help you out.
To send a Private Message, click my user name and click send a private message.
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For now though, you have your very, own thread to post whatever stories, sketches, or ideas you come up with.
Cheers.
Very well, let's try to help you here for now. Lately we've been following a little trail of bread crumbs of random story ideas scattered about the boards in various forums. As you've hopefully noticed these have been sent here to the fanfic forum.
This has become a problem as the front page was becoming covered with these, and nobody other than yourself appears to know exactly what they are. I've merged them all into one thread.
If you can think of a way you'd prefer to organize these in a manner which can be understood better, contact me via PM, and I'll help you out.
To send a Private Message, click my user name and click send a private message.
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Edit:
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For now though, you have your very, own thread to post whatever stories, sketches, or ideas you come up with.
Cheers.
Hey everyone
I'm still working on the ideas that I'm sending in. Joss is brilliant, that's why I want him to do it. This is Buffy, after saving Ben from a demon on the streets of New Sunnydale. Faith has thrown her portal ball, Eden has caught it (It seems Eden is a woman that holds her home dimension inside of her body. As well as spreading it with every step, she can change men into her own twisted creation by touching their flesh with her own). They may have pulled Faith out of the wreckage.
"Ben. It's just you, right? You're alone?"
"I don't know what happened. I was using the bathroom. And then, I was walking around in Sunnydale, again. That's when that demon attacked me, and now I'm- A god. And a pretty pissed off one at that, vampire slayer."
There's a back-hand somewhere in that last sentence. Kelly Ripa keeps replacing Claire Kramer in my visualizations. But, it's Claire Kramer. Anyone like it?
I'm still working on the ideas that I'm sending in. Joss is brilliant, that's why I want him to do it. This is Buffy, after saving Ben from a demon on the streets of New Sunnydale. Faith has thrown her portal ball, Eden has caught it (It seems Eden is a woman that holds her home dimension inside of her body. As well as spreading it with every step, she can change men into her own twisted creation by touching their flesh with her own). They may have pulled Faith out of the wreckage.
"Ben. It's just you, right? You're alone?"
"I don't know what happened. I was using the bathroom. And then, I was walking around in Sunnydale, again. That's when that demon attacked me, and now I'm- A god. And a pretty pissed off one at that, vampire slayer."
There's a back-hand somewhere in that last sentence. Kelly Ripa keeps replacing Claire Kramer in my visualizations. But, it's Claire Kramer. Anyone like it?
The Chosen
lol "but it's Clare Kramer"
You really need to check your PMs man 🙂
Moving this to perry's very own thread in the fan fic forum 🙂
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Good call...we should've thought of that 🙂
Moving this to perry's very own thread in the fan fic forum 🙂
Edit -
Good call...we should've thought of that 🙂
The Chosen
i suggest emailing him?
Is this a good character?
"I'd love to stay and watch them kill you, but I've other plans. Such as killing your friends, eating your sister, and claiming the throne of the beast. Well, see you in Hell." Evangeline, bringer of Eden, exits the courtyard.
"I'd love to stay and watch them kill you, but I've other plans. Such as killing your friends, eating your sister, and claiming the throne of the beast. Well, see you in Hell." Evangeline, bringer of Eden, exits the courtyard.
Hey I would like to just see what everbody thinks.
I originally posted in the wrong place again. I've already sent into 20th Century Fox. I think it's pretty good. It's not the full thing because who wants to ruin surprises... because it could happen... lol. But, I thought that I would post these up for some opinion.
Buffy, The Vampire Slayer: The New Demon Age
Buffy, The Vampire Slayer: The New Demon Age (pt 2)
Buffy, The Vampire Slayer: The New Demon Age (Series Finale)
The New Demon Age:
Buffy is dead. Xander and Willow are leading the girls. The prophecy foretelling the coming of a new demon age is in the hands of Faith, the Vampire Slayer. King Darius is searching for the sire to previous boy slayers. They're all unkillable vampires now. Jake, the Vampire Slayer is awaiting his resurrection from Hell. Eden is touching everyone she meets, and changing them into her own twisted creations. She's also about to create New Sunnydale over the HellMouth. The World is doomed.
The New Demon Age (pt. 2)
Buffy comes out of the perfect life (as a normal girl) she's found inside of her subconscious. Waiting for her is Angelus, the current leader in The New Demon Age. Faith, and Willow search the spirit world for the souls of Spike, and Angel. Xander, and The Slayers have to face off against Drusilla, and her unstoppable new boyfriend, The Judge. Amy Madison, and Warren Meeks arrive in New Sunnydale to awaken Acathala. Oz, and Kennedy struggle with their new relationship around the entire Slayer Squad. Spike has gotten his hands on the sample of water (from the fountain of eternal life). Jake, The Vampire Slayer has teamed up with The National Guard. The First Evil is waiting in the wings. Buffy has made a deal with a new player calling itself The Ultimate Being. A sphere has surrounded New Sunnydale, and it's Hell Mouth underneath. No one is getting in or out of her town until the battle is finished, and one of the sides has come out on top.
The New Demon Age (Series Finale)
An old friend has returned from the grave. Jake has lost to The First Evil, and is incapable of anything but the fight. The Slayers are preparing for a battle against something that may not even exist. They are searching for any kind of demon that could be responsible for the coming of this new demon age. Following a twenty-five minute love scene, and the death of one of the most valuable members of the Original Scooby Gang, the slayers, and their allies head into a battle, pointy end first against an army of unspeakable scaries, their leaders, and a being more evil than the beginning of evil itself.
I originally posted in the wrong place again. I've already sent into 20th Century Fox. I think it's pretty good. It's not the full thing because who wants to ruin surprises... because it could happen... lol. But, I thought that I would post these up for some opinion.
Buffy, The Vampire Slayer: The New Demon Age
Buffy, The Vampire Slayer: The New Demon Age (pt 2)
Buffy, The Vampire Slayer: The New Demon Age (Series Finale)
The New Demon Age:
Buffy is dead. Xander and Willow are leading the girls. The prophecy foretelling the coming of a new demon age is in the hands of Faith, the Vampire Slayer. King Darius is searching for the sire to previous boy slayers. They're all unkillable vampires now. Jake, the Vampire Slayer is awaiting his resurrection from Hell. Eden is touching everyone she meets, and changing them into her own twisted creations. She's also about to create New Sunnydale over the HellMouth. The World is doomed.
The New Demon Age (pt. 2)
Buffy comes out of the perfect life (as a normal girl) she's found inside of her subconscious. Waiting for her is Angelus, the current leader in The New Demon Age. Faith, and Willow search the spirit world for the souls of Spike, and Angel. Xander, and The Slayers have to face off against Drusilla, and her unstoppable new boyfriend, The Judge. Amy Madison, and Warren Meeks arrive in New Sunnydale to awaken Acathala. Oz, and Kennedy struggle with their new relationship around the entire Slayer Squad. Spike has gotten his hands on the sample of water (from the fountain of eternal life). Jake, The Vampire Slayer has teamed up with The National Guard. The First Evil is waiting in the wings. Buffy has made a deal with a new player calling itself The Ultimate Being. A sphere has surrounded New Sunnydale, and it's Hell Mouth underneath. No one is getting in or out of her town until the battle is finished, and one of the sides has come out on top.
The New Demon Age (Series Finale)
An old friend has returned from the grave. Jake has lost to The First Evil, and is incapable of anything but the fight. The Slayers are preparing for a battle against something that may not even exist. They are searching for any kind of demon that could be responsible for the coming of this new demon age. Following a twenty-five minute love scene, and the death of one of the most valuable members of the Original Scooby Gang, the slayers, and their allies head into a battle, pointy end first against an army of unspeakable scaries, their leaders, and a being more evil than the beginning of evil itself.