Yay! More fun with my Watchers Guide Volume 3!
This is from the original script.
How would you feel if the episode went this way?
In the interest of keeping the true ending of this episode from leaking, there were several different scripts, all with slightly different endings, circulated. Herer is how the script for one alternate episode ends:
ANGLE: IN THE SKY
A rift opens and a huge dragon flies out, screaming
as it sails past the girls.
DAWN (cont'd): "Buffy--"
BUFFY: "I don't care! Dawn, I won't lose you--"
DAWN: "I have to! You have to let me go! Blood starts it, and until the blood stops flowing it'll never stop. You know you have to let me..."
ON BUFFY
As she takes in Dawn's words, knowing it's true
ON DAWN
As, slowly at first, she takes a few steps away from her sister, towards the end of the platform.
ON BUFFY
Who does nothing to stop her.
ON DAWN AGAIN
A few more steps, faster this time, gaining speed until she is running toward the edge of the platform.
ANGLE: ABOVE THE END as Dawn reaches it and SWANDIVES right out and down toward the ball of energy.
CLOSE ON: DAWN
As she starts down
CLOSE ON: BUFFY
As she watches, crying
ANGLE: THE BALL OF ENERGY
As Dawn's body sails down into and disappears in a white light, causing the energy to go even wilder.
CLOSE ON: The group, as they look in vain to see what has happened.
CLOSE ON: DAWN's FACE
As she floats in the center of the maelstrom, being hit with the equivalent of a million jolts of electricity--
BUFFY--unable to leave the platform...
DAWN--hereyes slowly closing...
THE ENERGY BALL--exploding and suddently contracting out of existence...
Dawn disappearing with it.
CLOSE ON BUFFY'S FACE
BLACK OUT
END OF EPISODE
Eh...I think it was more emotional, much better, when Buffy died to save Dawn.
This is from the original script.
How would you feel if the episode went this way?
In the interest of keeping the true ending of this episode from leaking, there were several different scripts, all with slightly different endings, circulated. Herer is how the script for one alternate episode ends:
ANGLE: IN THE SKY
A rift opens and a huge dragon flies out, screaming
as it sails past the girls.
DAWN (cont'd): "Buffy--"
BUFFY: "I don't care! Dawn, I won't lose you--"
DAWN: "I have to! You have to let me go! Blood starts it, and until the blood stops flowing it'll never stop. You know you have to let me..."
ON BUFFY
As she takes in Dawn's words, knowing it's true
ON DAWN
As, slowly at first, she takes a few steps away from her sister, towards the end of the platform.
ON BUFFY
Who does nothing to stop her.
ON DAWN AGAIN
A few more steps, faster this time, gaining speed until she is running toward the edge of the platform.
ANGLE: ABOVE THE END as Dawn reaches it and SWANDIVES right out and down toward the ball of energy.
CLOSE ON: DAWN
As she starts down
CLOSE ON: BUFFY
As she watches, crying
ANGLE: THE BALL OF ENERGY
As Dawn's body sails down into and disappears in a white light, causing the energy to go even wilder.
CLOSE ON: The group, as they look in vain to see what has happened.
CLOSE ON: DAWN's FACE
As she floats in the center of the maelstrom, being hit with the equivalent of a million jolts of electricity--
BUFFY--unable to leave the platform...
DAWN--hereyes slowly closing...
THE ENERGY BALL--exploding and suddently contracting out of existence...
Dawn disappearing with it.
CLOSE ON BUFFY'S FACE
BLACK OUT
END OF EPISODE
Eh...I think it was more emotional, much better, when Buffy died to save Dawn.